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~4.9k words. F/m, human/human, shrinking and hard vore (really hard, not just a little munching).
I've been in such a hard vore mood lately, it even got me writing. This is just a little story from the point of view of a real predator who finds her perfect prey falling into her lap.
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Posted by StalkOBroccoli 11 years ago Report
WOW - uhm.
thought I'd give a story a read.
I'm not a fan of hard vore, f/m, or gore in general.
but this was kinda fantastic.
the imagery is splendidly horrific.
i never knew you were such a fan of gore!
it kinda suits you, in an ironic way - you always seem so kind, yet you like such ravenous things.
i love it!
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<Grin> I guess I see myself more on the Scott side of things, but it's fun to look through the lenses of the predator sometimes. I'm glad you liked it! I really didn't think it would get me a single positive comment. :)
Posted by XDDX 11 years ago Report
It already got you more than one =P
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
I meant a comment comment. Not a comment! Pshh!
<grin>
Posted by XDDX 11 years ago Report
Fine..
Posted by XDDX 11 years ago Report
I really liked this story and I think your pred was great. Having her use some sort of drugs to shrink her prey is great (as opposed to some sort of magic), I think that's how I would have done it =X ^^
I wonder what the brain was like...
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
<Grin> Thanks!
I think the brain was kind of like Aspic. ;)