Posted by rugli 11 years ago Report

Your story is well writtnen but the unwilling tone though sounds bit out of the line though. Given how you describe sexyness of Luna and how everyonse seeems to be attracted to her I would have thought that they did actually come willingly to her when they find out her secret other wise I see not much worng with your story I will keep on reading if you keep on writing.

Posted by stressformurder 11 years ago Report

Yeah I understand what you mean, I'm just not one for willing prey :-\. It's actually a turn off for me wen the prey is will. It destroys the whole domination aspect of it. I like vore because it's like "You're going to go inside me completely against your will, and I'm going to love every part of it." I suppose I could do a willing sequence though if you'd like. But it will probably only be with one or two people in the story.

Posted by stressformurder 11 years ago Report

Oh and by the way, thank you :D!

Posted by darc22005 9 years ago Report

Great set of stories, do you plan on making any others in the future?

Posted by stressformurder 9 years ago Report

I actually had another one in progress titled "The accident" but I don't know why I stopper working on it. Perhaps I should pick it up again and finish it :).

Posted by darc22005 9 years ago Report

Your stories are a good read, Ild like to see you finish it.

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

What happened to Jessica

Posted by saltimore 3 years ago Report

Digested, most likely.

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

we really don’t know if she even escape or not so I would say she still alive but some how got out cause in this it said her butt ate two people when she ate that random girl, Jessica and one of the girls from the pool so that means There’s a high chance Jessica escape and hid some where in the house just not to be find by the pred