I think it's a great picture, and it's always nice to see more anal vore:)
At first I was a bit confused about the belly, but then I realized you went for the "squeezed against the wall" look. I think that if you made the belly wider it would look more correct, I think... and the shadows may be a bit sharp.
I hope I don't sound to harsh, but you asked us what we thought and I wanted to give some feedback that might help you improve a bit.
It's a really great picture, and I hope you keep up the good work!
in short, love it. Also to make things more confusing for you, unlike everybody else on here so far i love the sagging belly look. It gives a sense that the belly is full and heavy from its occupant. Hope to see more from you :3
Thanks for all of the commentary. I hadn't really thought out the background, though I did mean for her to lean against a wall. I'll see about fixing it up. Stay tuned!
As for the belly, I was trying to imagine how a person would fold up when confined like that. There has to be room for legs and arms and such, and gravity must play its role too. That's why her belly sags. Does that make sense?
Posted by RikuHidanza 11 years ago Report
I like it a lot ^_^
just a few things the pose she's in is slightly confusing It looks to me like she's either against a wall or on the ground
The second thing is a more a personal taste thing I prefer bellies to be more rounded and not hang down so much.
Regardless of those two things it's an amazing piece of art.
Posted by RikuHidanza 11 years ago Report
Also only just noticed this but really nice touch with the subtle tan lines on her bum
Posted by Lady_List 11 years ago Report
There isn't enough Ranma 1/2 vore out there~ you did really good job with this~
Posted by SparkyTheWolf 11 years ago Report
It's great, I love it :3
But as @RikuHidanza said: bellies look better rounded in my opinion too
Posted by SparkyTheWolf 11 years ago Report
also how do you link someone's name so their name is a link to their page?
Posted by ZRex030 11 years ago Report
You've heard it a lot by now but I'll say it again; rounded bellies.
Posted by NekuTheEmo 11 years ago Report
Can never have enough Anal Vore pictures <3
Posted by Marcasus 11 years ago Report
I think it's a great picture, and it's always nice to see more anal vore:)
At first I was a bit confused about the belly, but then I realized you went for the "squeezed against the wall" look. I think that if you made the belly wider it would look more correct, I think... and the shadows may be a bit sharp.
I hope I don't sound to harsh, but you asked us what we thought and I wanted to give some feedback that might help you improve a bit.
It's a really great picture, and I hope you keep up the good work!
Posted by DriderMan 11 years ago Report
in short, love it. Also to make things more confusing for you, unlike everybody else on here so far i love the sagging belly look. It gives a sense that the belly is full and heavy from its occupant. Hope to see more from you :3
Posted by SomeGuy1294 11 years ago Report
Ramma 1/2. SQUEEEEE!!!
Posted by teachan351 11 years ago Report
Thanks for all of the commentary. I hadn't really thought out the background, though I did mean for her to lean against a wall. I'll see about fixing it up. Stay tuned!
As for the belly, I was trying to imagine how a person would fold up when confined like that. There has to be room for legs and arms and such, and gravity must play its role too. That's why her belly sags. Does that make sense?
Posted by Dudeifail1 11 years ago Report
I really like how this looks. I hope to see more of your work
Posted by Yoshi 11 years ago Report
good job! clean lines and concise color