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The Tragedy of a Broken Light By joeburp22181 -- Report

Uploaded: 11 years ago

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The horrible tragedy of a young life which rapidly comes to a useless and carelessly damning end.

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joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report

Created this story in about eight hours.

DenethorN

Posted by DenethorN 11 years ago Report

Shannon sounds like a real delight :D

Poor Nichole though. She got the worst of it - losing her soul to the succubus and not even getting a single orgasm :)

Excellent story.

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report

Thanks... Glad you enjoyed.

Ruco

Posted by Ruco 11 years ago Report

As always your stories REALLY turn me on!
The extended description of the slow draining process is particularly erotic. I have said before, that energy and essence draining is a HUGE turn on, so you can imagine hot hot this story got me.

I Hope you may write more stories involving this wonderful Succubus. I also hope when we see her again, she uses her Vaginal Vore method to drain the soul and body of her prey >;)

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report

We'll have to see! ;-) Thanks for the compliment!

Ruco

Posted by Ruco 11 years ago Report

You are most welcome!
Can't wait to see more ;)

RavenousVoid

Posted by RavenousVoid 6 years ago Report

I was hoping Jackie would have the resolve to swallow Angela and Jake and give Joe a better life as a Grandmother could. But oh well it was still pretty good.

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 6 years ago Report

Thank yah!