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A shattering nation on the verge of defeat gets back on it's feet thanks to the likes of this one Veronica Zemanova
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Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Trying to upload this story to deviant art but the clip and paste option tells me that I can only upload a text file of 65kb or smaller in size. Tried to also put it under the category of Literature / Prose / Fiction / Fantasy / Short stories without success. If someone could tell me how to upload it there, I would appreciate it.
Joe
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So far all categories I have tried don't classify this story correctly, therefor I am still unable to upload my story to deviant art.
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An idea popped into my head for some of the creation of this story from this picture I viewed on facebook.com
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=442882795750983&set=a.175837752455490.32467.173389932700272&type=1&theater
Posted by brosuke 11 years ago Report
Veronica seemed sexy as hell, but there were way too many implications that this is the next step from today's politics. Can't say I'm a fan of politics working their way into your story is all I'm sayin.
Just my 2 cents...
Btw, my fave of your posts is definitely "Strip Poker." I think it'd be awesome to see more about that character. June sounded like a hell of a woman.
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliment.
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
a second strip poker? sounds interesting. feel free to PM me some ideas...
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
I did a bunch more spell checking and grammar checking and actually added to the substance of this story quite a lot more, hopefully you will all enjoy this modification and that this will be an even more enjoyable read... Please send feedback... Thanks