Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report

Oh goodness! Why isn't this emblazoned across the front page somewhere in shining lights? It's so wickedly cute and deliriously adorable.

I loved it. So different! And the pacing was quick and snappy.

I knew I had to read the entirety of it when I saw the preview.

Well played!!

Posted by ParentJam 11 years ago Report

Why, thank you very much!

I really tried to give it the spirit of a children's rhyme, despite the dark core.

I can't express how happy I am that you found it such a pleasurable read, and I will surely try to do more in this style!

Posted by mephistoVII 11 years ago Report

I really like it~ the way you made it sound so
innocent while giving it a kind of cruel core is
amazing! great work.

Posted by ParentJam 11 years ago Report

Thank so much! ^^
I'm really happy it is received as good as it is!

The strong contrast between message and medium does have a certain appeal, I'd say :)

Posted by VixieMoondew 11 years ago Report

The fairy dust illuminating the mouth is a very nice touch!

Posted by ParentJam 11 years ago Report

Thanks! The fairy dust glowing from within the drider's mouth was actually the only thing I really had in mind before I started working on this one :)

Posted by DoubleOSnake 11 years ago Report

Haha, that was a fun little story! :D

Posted by PrinnyDood 11 years ago Report

I admit I was a little dubious of vore-poetry at first, but this was actually really good! I great mix of cute and wicked. :3

Posted by ParentJam 11 years ago Report

I'm happy to hear that I have gone beyond your expectations ^^