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An RP with my regular partner (now dubbed 'WolfPelt the Maneater'!) that I'd been waiting to post until I finally got Autumn's Hobby finished and up. I've done a bit of rewriting on this to tidy it up for reading, but it still suffers a bit from the ping-pong effect in time of going back and forth between POVs.
34 pages, ~16k words, F/mf Macro/micro, food prep, mostly soft, and undescribed hard
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Posted by Littledude 10 years ago Report
I enjoyed this a lot. Although there wasn't a lot of description for the characters which made picturing the action somewhat difficult, the rest was very vivid and well written enough to compensate.
Posted by 4ofSwords 10 years ago Report
Thanks! When we first started the lack of description was a feature, rather an a bug, but we've started to feel it's lacking as well.