I'm glad to hear that you managed to contact her again! Talking with an old friend can be awkward at times, but it brings back so many happy memories that it's worth the awkwardness.
As for the story: good work, and glad to see some of your narration again! I actually quite liked the sympathetic approach to this.
I'll admit, going back and editing the raw log file made me realize that I really liked the less aggressive approach that this one took. Leilani was a fun partner. I don't think I'd have gone this way without her prompting.
Posted by dragonfred 11 years ago Report
great story!
Posted by seadog-driftwood 11 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear that you managed to contact her again! Talking with an old friend can be awkward at times, but it brings back so many happy memories that it's worth the awkwardness.
As for the story: good work, and glad to see some of your narration again! I actually quite liked the sympathetic approach to this.
Posted by Terris 11 years ago Report
I'll admit, going back and editing the raw log file made me realize that I really liked the less aggressive approach that this one took. Leilani was a fun partner. I don't think I'd have gone this way without her prompting.