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Though it took much more time than I expected, here is the first chapter in the OpVore series. Please leave a comment saying if you would like to see more of this, as I am planning on just focusing on Medieval Vore in the future. Also, if anyone would be so kind as to come up with a name for both series (because Medieval Vore and OpVore are not quite cutting it with me :/ ) It would be much appreciated :D
Consider this a New Year's Eve gift
Also, any type of feedback would be much beneficial to me with this story, any comment will do: favorite character, favorite part, etc.
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Posted by Justsomeone 11 years ago Report
Absolutely loved this and would love to see more of it.
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Why thank you, will work on the outline for the next couple of chapters as soon a I can :D. If anything, I would probably ask what your favorite character is so far... just to see if I'm doing a good job with character personality, etc. :D
Posted by Justsomeone 11 years ago Report
I'd have to give it a reread to name my favorite character because I forgot their names. But I enjoyed that pred girl who almost had our protagonist done in.
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Her identity will be revealed fairly soon... but I'm glad you liked her :D
Posted by nauczyciel 11 years ago Report
loved the pred
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
why thank you, Mushi master, there will definitely be more of her... but in a way that you may not think ^^
Posted by Merlin 11 years ago Report
Hi,
I really enjoyed the story. Please write more. I would love to be the girl's next meal.
Thanks for sharing.
Sincerely,
Mark Bryan
Posted by USful 11 years ago Report
Thanks, I am currently busy with other things in life, but as soon as I have time, I will pump out the next chapter :D