Posted by oddhis 11 years ago Report

Woho! She is going inside the belly :P This is the best comic ever ^^

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Yayyyy c:

Posted by chaotic123 11 years ago Report

well we knew this was going to happen sooner or later

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

It needed to be.

Posted by poldenski 11 years ago Report

i know we all were expecting the giantess to be eaten you never know Debolte might pull a surprise twist and have val unbirth the giantess or something.

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Not to get your hopes down, but heh, I sure am holding a surprise, but unbirth is not on the... menu, right now. Sorry :D

Posted by Morphy 11 years ago Report

It's... almost an anti-climax. We've just seen her stretch around far (far!) more than that giantess will ever occupy (in page 26). Mind you, I'm not going to stop her from doing it anyway because microvore is so unbelievably rare, it's a crime.

Posted by Morphy 11 years ago Report

Upon review of page 26, we have two conflicting perspectives. In the very bottom right corner the giantess is maybe 1/20th the size of a waterfilled belly. But just above it, she's maybe about the same size, or a little larger in volume. Now I'm confused. >.<

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Damn ! Now you got me cornered ! haha, I must have done the sketches too fast... and the inking too. I just followed the sketches when inking but indeed the size of the giantess is a bit big in page 26. In fact, the belly should have been much larger in the panel above the last one. The last one is about right, considering the size of what Val' drank. But I should have either drawn the GTS smaller or the belly go off panel in the panel just above.

Now comes another error that I'll confess, but is much less confusing : I was kinda tired when sketching these pages back then, and I had trouble matching the sizes of Val' and the GTS. Meaning, in page 27, Val is drawn too large for what she compares when she sucks on the toes here. And the right size is on this page. She's not near 1/2 of the GTS' size, like drawn in page 27, but instead is more like 1/5 of her... I should have worked more strictly with references to get that right all along. That's what I get for working lazily :/ But meh, I guess people won't mind this too much. At least it this continuity error won't turn them off lol

Other than that, I must admit I had that anti-climax feel when drawing that as well. It's kinda regressing in "biggest things she can fit in there". But I wanted Val' not to be too small before gobbling her up. I could've edited the storyline so that the huge water drink comes after this but arhhh, I didn't ever planned a storyline anyway. The panels were mostly drawn on the feel as the context progressed. You could call this an improv comic, as its making (sketching) was pretty much spontaneous. I could have worked a solid storyline and context, but I'd have had complex choices to make with all the things to fit right. I was doing it for fun so I went with the spontaneous vibe hehe... I'll try avoiding these in my next storyline though... I have many things planned and I'll try my best then to avoid such errors. Thanks for the thought comment, and I hope you can still enjoy the comic :p

Posted by Morphy 11 years ago Report

Still enjoy it? I never stopped. :)

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Yay. c:

Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

She is dangerously quick.

Posted by Gendor 11 years ago Report

Any ways of getting non-animated comic pages?

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Well maybe ? But why ? Doesn't the Gif version work if you can't see this Flash one ?

Posted by Gendor 11 years ago Report

Yeah i do see it but where the picture keeps going back and forth i find myself feeling like i'm not sure what came first and it drags me right out of the feeling for reading the comic.

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

Well this is inappropriate for this page since there is no progression, just an x-ray transition to show what's inside her maw. However I must agree I've had the same worry as you in previous pages, as there is a sequence of events (such as growth or movement) but no clear hint of which frame is the first one :/ That said, I can't really get the said animated pages not-animated, since some panels overlap other panels sometimes. But ! I do take this comment in count and while I will certainly change things for the next animated pages to be easily understood, I will try as well to re-do previous animated pages to remedy the same issue. Thanks for the input ^^

Posted by Gendor 11 years ago Report

Thank you! I only felt this to be more of a "I like this, but it would be better if...", and i hope it didn't come out as anything else.

Posted by Debolte 11 years ago Report

yeap no prob. It sure would have helped if you precised some "Hey I got a suggestion for your comic" But yeah, I gotcha :p