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Just a scene that came to me. Something about a man asks a succubus/demoness to help him live out a sexual fantasy and take the form of Cheetara from Thundercats, so he can finally fuck the characterlike he always wanted to as a teenager.
Price tag? Has to bring her pleasure by his show of powerful lust. IF he cannot fuck her hard enough, lusty enough, his soul is demon food.
Hints in here about the shadow pets Im'Rhys keeps/has.
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Posted by SirScotty 11 years ago Report
Definitely a little more vulgar (in terms of specific vocabulary, rather than events) than I'm used to, but given the subject matter I think it actually works better. I only noticed a typo or two along the way, and it was excellently written. Definitely fun to read!
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Thank you, and this is what happens when I turn off internal filters, and I wake-up and decide to just "type" lol
I proof-read this before I posted it and was surprised by my lack of typos. Yeah, I had to clean up one or two tense, pronouns, and one or two other things here and there, but compared to my usual hundreds of mistakes in the past, this was clean, lol.
(No writing friends, this is not an invite to use-up some of those red pens you have stockpiled, lol, I know it isn't perfect, and is only an alpha copy)
And BTW, this WAS supposed to show Im'Rhys on a horny succubus-y day(night?), so the language was made to match.
Posted by SirScotty 11 years ago Report
You should turn off your filters more often then! I think, over all, I saw one place that could have used a comma, and one swapped pronoun, and that was it. I'd have to go through with a fine tooth comb to even find those again, much less more.
Was there any particular reason for using Cheetara, rather than some other character (or even a generic anthro shape)? I'm curious to see the behind-the-scenes, as it were.
Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report
Ummm, just sort of happened as a shorthand for "cat female with a short fur coat like in succubus range #5", because I wanted her to actually be able to enjoy (Im'Rhys is a masochist) what she considers "squishy human lovers" playing with her via a fur coat/pelt. I know who cheetara is by name. She has along enough tail to accommodate Immy wanting to get done "now" via overstimulating him (she leans more towards women than men anyways, as she normally just eats the souls of men and moves on). And I was seeking shorthands that would not require me to insert info-dump notes.