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A rough day. By SREDISKRAD -- Report

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This is a really short story (1065 words+title). I was intending to write a short story, but I've decided against adding to this, it's got (what I feel) a great amount of description for ~1100 words.

The dragon Rimentus is not mine and is property of Rimentus (user). The setting is also using one that is alike to Rimentus' lair in (user) Rimentus' "Seek and Hide" series (I recommend you go check him out, his work is amazing).

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SREDISKRAD

Posted by SREDISKRAD 11 years ago Report

After what he did to try and devour the guy who sells mints to dragons, I actually think he's a little kinder. Still, I think your Rimentus deserves more than just 1000 words, you can just about paint a picture with this story...

Kali

Posted by Kali 11 years ago Report

Very good. I like the both the sensory and emotional details in this one. I feel a bit sorry for the nameless human.