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When Jasmin forgets to tell her boss about a change to the most important meeting of his life he doesn't take the news very well. As a result Jasmin has to face some very caustic punishment, and whats worse she gets fired.
if you like what you see let me know in the comments below. I thrive on feedback. The more I get the more I will write. (Side effects may vary)
The image is part of a pic Vorry did for me many many many years ago. Go give that guy some love, he is awesome ^_^
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Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
where is the link to thaat pic?
Can you do an alternative?
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Alternative?
Posted by rugli 10 years ago Report
Maybe not and direct of this one but an story where an hot secretary eats her boss.
Posted by Draconatedz 10 years ago Report
Wonderful cruelness to the prey, nice descriptiveness all around, wonderful teasing from the wife, great digestion and scat detail.
My only complaint would be that I would have liked some more description in the sex scenes with the wife, along with some more metal teasing to the prey from both parties during it.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am glad you liked it ^_^ I am not too interested in the sex parts, the eating is far more important to me. As for the latter scenes John has been trying to hide his secret from his wife.
Posted by Draconatedz 10 years ago Report
I meant something like both his wife and himself thinking about the prey in his stomach while sex and the like, but I totally understand what you mean. Still a great story.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
While I prefer a lot more connection with the pred and prey as opposed to outside relationships, this was still a very nice read! Your descriptions are great and I like how you gave the pred an odd quirk in his personality, like his addiction to Angry Birds.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you. I am glad you like it even if it wasn't everything you normally like. I worked hard on this one and edited it myself (not my strong point). I had good fun writing this one, I did actually start to feel bad for Jasmin though >_> But as a man eater I had to put that behind me ^_^
Posted by Kenkii 10 years ago Report
I love your cruel predator writing - just the right amount of sadism and carnal hunger.
Excellent work C: I hope I can look forward to future works like this one.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much. I am glad you like it ^_^ I am usually that cruel to my food so its nice that people like it
Posted by ZaaZaa 10 years ago Report
I want him to tell his wife. I love what she thinks of his pallet and her reactions to it. Mmmmm~
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
He will do someday I am sure, and she will act all surprised and shocked before eventually telling him it turns her on ^_^