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A Lesson Over Dinner
by indighost for
AnonymousParasite.
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...Celestia lay on her side, cheeks flushed, now panting herself, with her ordinarily pristine, muscular white belly stretched all beyond proportion. It now reached nearly beyond her own hooves, and it continued to jiggle, contort, slosh, and gurgle unnaturally as the girl who had been swallowed down inside moved about....
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Thanks for the opportunity AP! This was tons of fun to write.
This is an erotic vore fiction (non-fatal). Note that it is highly obscene and perverse. I make no claim to any intellectual property rights.
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Posted by yes 10 years ago Report
I loved this story! All I would say is to give the names of the maid more lore friendly pony names. It was kinda jarring read normal human names against the fantastical pony ones. But a minor gripe. Great job regardless.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Thanks! And yes I wasn't sure about the pony naming convention. What might be good names for maids or servants?
Posted by yes 10 years ago Report
I guess the names could be a play on words or even just a household object. Like "Feather Duster" or something. I'm not the most imaginative person, so maybe you'd have better ideas than I would.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Good to know, I will add it to my notes.
Posted by MutualTaco 10 years ago Report
Enjoyable story, chief. I've read your stories for a while, and was pleasantly surprised to see this one from you.
Is this pony story from you a once-off request, or do you intend to write more with these characters?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
This was a specific commission request. However I do like the show a lot and there is a story idea involving fluttershy, pinky and fluttershy's furred and feathered friends that I have had in the back of my mind and noted in my ideas file : )
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
You.. like... MLP?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
This is neither the first, nor the last time I will shamelessly wax poetic about a horse's butt :)
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
It already has! Art by Dragga, 1 of 2:
http://aryion.com/g4/view/256754
Posted by Mid_Night 10 years ago Report
i wonder if there is a second part for this it is amazing.
Posted by VelveteenDreams 10 years ago Report
Oh my god...I usually hate fan erotica... but this is just amazing...I don't know if I should give in and favorite or keep my dignity and not...