thanks for the feedback! I'm sorry you didn't like the ending, I've always found digestion scenes kinda difficult to imagine and didn't wan't to risk ruining it by going on too long :P (Also it was about 3 in the morning and I was sleepy).
I might try to make an addendum/alternate ending type thing at some point which details the digestion more
and the award for arrogant dragon goes too...
kinda felt a little, forced in more ways than one, I enjoyed the details you put into this with her trying to get into the mouth (keeping in mind the dragon seemed relatively small)
Yeah I'm not really happy with how this turned out.. tbh I only uploaded it because a couple of people asked to see it XD
On the bright side though, I'm glad you noticed the details of the actual "vore" part. I spent some time trying to get the idea across of just how small the dragon was and thinking about how the girl was gonna fit :)
Oh my !! I was sorry to give the wrong idea, I did enjoy the whole story. However if you did make a change to the ending, adding digestion, wll it make it more enjoyable
I LOVE the idea of the pred forcing the unwilling prey to feed itself to it. As well as the size difference between prey and pred despite the stomach still holding the prey snuggly. c:
Posted by sharky 9 years ago Report
This is not a bad story. I would like to have seen more detail on the digestion part, I felt it was a bit hurried
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Posted by hunnter 9 years ago Report
thanks for the feedback! I'm sorry you didn't like the ending, I've always found digestion scenes kinda difficult to imagine and didn't wan't to risk ruining it by going on too long :P (Also it was about 3 in the morning and I was sleepy).
I might try to make an addendum/alternate ending type thing at some point which details the digestion more
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Posted by Junogray 9 years ago Report
and the award for arrogant dragon goes too...
kinda felt a little, forced in more ways than one, I enjoyed the details you put into this with her trying to get into the mouth (keeping in mind the dragon seemed relatively small)
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Posted by hunnter 9 years ago Report
Yeah I'm not really happy with how this turned out.. tbh I only uploaded it because a couple of people asked to see it XD
On the bright side though, I'm glad you noticed the details of the actual "vore" part. I spent some time trying to get the idea across of just how small the dragon was and thinking about how the girl was gonna fit :)
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Posted by sharky 9 years ago Report
Oh my !! I was sorry to give the wrong idea, I did enjoy the whole story. However if you did make a change to the ending, adding digestion, wll it make it more enjoyable
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Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
I LOVE the idea of the pred forcing the unwilling prey to feed itself to it. As well as the size difference between prey and pred despite the stomach still holding the prey snuggly. c:
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Posted by californasun 7 years ago Report
Good vore part. Real good, hope you add a part 2 with a slow painful digstion (if you havent already :D )
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Posted by gynophagetopper 10 months ago Report
Great story. The way she was talked into feeding herself to the dragon and the details of fitting into the throat were very well written.
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