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Makuta had heard about the newest club in town and wanted to party his tail off. After an eternal wait in the freezing cold a sexy stranger offers him a way to warm up fast. His night takes an unfortunate turn when things turn rough.
This was a commission by Makuta of their character as prey to a random bird girl one of mine.
If you like it why not commission me to write for you ^_^
Makuta is owned by His Player
Tia is mine
Updated at request of commissioner, April 2020
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Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
nciedigestionaja
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
^_^ You know I can do it very well. Glad you liked it.
Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
teah ejje, ou maje a gerat sotries jaa
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
huh? ^_^;
Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
Thanks, jeje,youmajea ghreat sotries jee
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
I am glad you like em. I try ^_^
Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
jeje yo9ua re food jaa
Posted by Makuta 9 years ago Report
Yes here is the awesome story, thank you very much again. :)
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
I am very pleased you liked it. I wanted to make sure it was perfect for you ^_^
Posted by miranda_dragon 9 years ago Report
Nicely done!
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it ^_^ I think I am getting pretty good at this sort of vore
Posted by Bright 9 years ago Report
I find it very entertaining when the predator keeps on doing their stuff after the prey has been eaten.
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Me too. I love when they get away with out anyone noticing the squirming bulge in their gut :)
Posted by nauczyciel 8 years ago Report
great read
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Thank you ^_^ I am glad you liked it
Posted by Dolsilyol 8 years ago Report
So, in order to understand my feelings on my second reading of one of your works, please refer to the pervious praise, then add in the fact that you describe anatomy, the movements of the stomach, all of it, in exquisitely decant detail! Also the added touch of it being bird shit instead of normal waste is delightful as well!
Also, in response to the little header for contents, can praise cross the line twice and make someone end up as food? XP
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Well aren't you the super fan. another like ^_^ I am glad you like this one too. Is there any that you don't like? also you want to end up as food?
Posted by Dolsilyol 8 years ago Report
I can't help it, I just think your stuff is the shit! I sort of don't like the Office one, and the spice of life one, because, while still extraordinary, I don't like male pred's unless it's in a Rp. Because kinks are weird. I'll make exception for feminine pred's though, and futa's are always great.
As for being eaten? Playing as a Pred is pretty fun, but there's nothing quite like the thrill of being prey! So, yes! I adore being eaten, whether it's fatal or non fatal, unbirth or anal!
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Well I have one more male pred out there somehwere... though I can't remember what it was called ^_^; But I get liking certain things. I try to write for all my fans, thats why most of my stories are different to each other.
I am glad you like my stories. Have you read them all?
Posted by Dolsilyol 8 years ago Report
Now I've read them all! Just spent, I think the last 4-5 hours reading through them all! You're just too damn talented, cause I love just about every single one of them! It was also nice to learn who the cute squid lady asking to eat me was :P
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Well that is some dedication. I hope you didn't read them straight after each other. And you missed commenting on some of my favs too, shame. :p
Yes Acore is one of my more interesting characters. She is fun to write for.
Posted by Dolsilyol 8 years ago Report
Hmm, What ones did I miss? And of course I read them all in one sitting! :D
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Permanent position and the call one. I liked that one even though I can't remember what its called lol ^_^