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A hungry mermaid chooses to prey upon a fish which puts up more of a fight than she expected. Indigestion, stomach ache and tables turned for the predator. Short story put together late at night.
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Posted by SuperSpaceZone 10 years ago Report
Hehe, I love how even the sharks want nothing to do with her, and yet swallowing a fish has her laid up and gurgling! Goes to show you even the most powerful predator can be subdued by indigestion!
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Sharks can be fought off, but a belly ache can't! If something's nigh indigestible, there's nothing a pred can do about it... hehehe!
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Pain can also be a dangerous provocation. I could see a mermaid with a belly ache to be even more dangerous, pain often throws rational thought adrift and replaces it with instinct and anger.
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
*nod nod* That's surely the other possibility as to what could transpire, the affected pred growing violent with discomfort instead of being incapacitated.
Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
ncie digesiton y love it eje >:p
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Thank you! c:
Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
your welcomefood, now,come ehre imhungrye jej
Posted by Bags 10 years ago Report
Is your profile pic another pic of seena! You should upload that one as well :ad
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
It's not her unfortunately, but you'll get to see more soon enough c:
Posted by Bags 10 years ago Report
I want to see more! I love it when cute female preds get indigestion from prey! It's my favorite type of vore!
Posted by The K 10 years ago Report
What a amazing story. I loved how you described her belly when bloated and the bellyache. This was amazing. Great story.
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it! c: Thanks for the fave too!
Posted by CratedCheese 10 years ago Report
Really love the story!
What a feisty little fish! :o
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Thank you lots! c: Feisty indeed! Wonder how it'll feel coming out!
Posted by CratedCheese 10 years ago Report
Hopefully she doesn't find another fish like that!
Posted by Svartvinge 10 years ago Report
Sounded like a pretty nasty fish to eat that! D: poor Mer
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
It certainly gave her a run for her money! c:
Posted by Mukat 10 years ago Report
This is wonderfully written! I have to admit, I'm a bit envious of the fish, if Seena was able to feel it in her stomach so vividly the entire time. ^^ This was an absolutely delightful read.
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Thanks, Mukat! I really appreciate it c: Hm, perhaps we ought to do some kind of collab sometime.
Posted by Mukat 10 years ago Report
Perhaps! ^^ We can talk it over a bit later on, once I wrap up my latest round of commissions.
Posted by DoubleOSnake 10 years ago Report
This was a fantastic little read! I never thought someone could put so much description around the simple idea of indigestion! Great work Itsuune. :D
Posted by Itsuune 10 years ago Report
Thank you kindly! c: I just try to harp on about the uncomfortable details a little. Oh, I could recommend Indighost for detailed descriptions of indigestion!
Posted by Indighost 9 years ago Report
so beautiful! I absolutely love how you cover the entire digestive process in detail.