Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

If you needed his full name, you could have asked! XD

Very good over all. Perhaps I should have clarified more on the ending (I'd meant for implied reformation and no scat), but everything else is pretty much spot on!

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

I DID ask for personal information,
but you only gave me vague directions
to another fan-fiction with litte to
find even there xD I can change it?

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

Oh, did I? I'm so sorry! XD

Yes, you can. Here's some more info I should mention...

His full name is Miles King. No nickname.

No scat.

In the ending, she should realize knowingly that she'd eaten someone in her sleep (hinting that that may have happened before), and give off hints she'd reform whoever it was.

Miles wears glasses, has longer blonde hair, and hazel eyes. Those things may or may not be useful, but I figured you might need them.

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

I'll get an updated version
posted tomorrow, replacing
this one.

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

Actually, why don't you keep this one up? For the people who enjoy fatal and scat.

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

Will do. I'll make sure to
alert people revolving the
changes in the second one.

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

Okay. ^^

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

Also, only just realized today this ending implies reformation. I must have been real tired last night, because I didnt see it. XD

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

Still want me to change it so that SHE
implies to reform him later on her own?
Or should I keep that part?

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

She implies, yes. XD I like the idea of a Lopunny that's always getting free, filling meals.

How's that coming along, btw?

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

Forward. If I told you the reason
for my day just vanishing, you'd
not believe me. Let's just say it
involved signs and angry people...

Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report

I'll trust you on that, then. Hope things go better. ^^

Posted by Trexthepony 10 years ago Report

I want to be next

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

I will have net at home in
3 days, so I can access my
Skype and such from home!
So it can be done =P

Posted by Trexthepony 10 years ago Report

Ok then
See you then friend

Posted by Flamewarproductions 10 years ago Report

FurfrouAffinity, EeveeiantArt and Ekan’s Portal
http://hyperallergic.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/11/clap.gif

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

Thank you, thank you ^_^ *bows*
I love working a few "Lopuns"
into the stories here and there.

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

I'm not crazy about the reforming bit at the ending, and the extra additions to her curves is hyperbole.

But I loooove this story! It's got a whole lot of character and personality without even using the protagonist's name. That probably helps in relating the reader to the character as well, I dunno if you did that intentionally.
But there were many very nice touches; the internet sites mentioned in brief detail add a strong sense of reality; connecting the imaginary world of pokemon with ours. The "Eeveiant Art" was a charming pun. X3

But yes! Also details about the Lopunny's body were very specific. I like the increased heart rate and the boy's fascination with it. I like that she's not designed to swallow too powerfully 'cause she's not a predator, but when he tilts himself far enough down he's crossed that threshold and it's a very brief trip from there.

The scat scene was respectfully brief for those it might offend. Being a lover of that myself, I wish you had offered a little more detail there, but it was still great that you included it at all. And even though I'm not personally inclined toward the reforming bit, your open-ended presentation of the mechanism by which it happened and it's confirmed effectiveness was very natural. There was very little, if anything contrived in this work. ^ ^

You did soooo much right with this story, I absolutely gotta favorite it. <3

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

Thank you very much =D
Not to act like a total fanboy,
but hearing that from YOU really
means a lot. Followed your work
for a few years with big interrest =D
And yeah, personally I am not a big fan
of reforming either, I like it permanent
vore. Irreversable digestion, or none at
all. But this was a requested story for
an art-trade, so I stuck to descriptions.
I will update this story though, since a
few things need change after I was given
more information to go on =) A version 2.
Won't go on and on, but thanks a bundle
for the wonderful and thought-out comment!
Made my morning to wake up to ^_^

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Wow, very cool! I had no idea anyone read my stuff. X3

But you did such a good job, I couldn't *not* comment and favorite. I'm kinda glad that we're of the same mind in terms of permadeath and am gonna be keepin' an eye out for your future stuff. : 3

Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report

... Yeah fuck it, not gonna hide it.
If you see a 7 foot gay nord with a
long brown beard run down the street
while giggling like a school girl?
Don't hide, I am not a creep or a stalker or such.
But seriously though, this is my top moment on Eka's
so far =P Yours and Cownugget's art were the first
in Vore I ever came across all those years ago.
You're a big part in me discovering my fetishes.
Sorry if I come across as a fanboy or creep ^_^'

Posted by Lucky 10 years ago Report

Not at all! I'm really glad you're able to be up-front about havin' strong emotions. I'm also really glad that my art helped you get to that point. ^ ^

Also yes, Cownugget is AMAZING. He was one of the guys that got me really goin' strong in vore, so I fanboy out too. Don't feel weird. : 3

Posted by Sharktooth98 8 years ago Report

could you please put tags for the prey

Posted by Sharktooth98 8 years ago Report

i wish he tried to eat her
not enough lopunny preys