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WARNING: This is the same story in general as the old one, with some details changed as well as the ending per request of my art-trade partner. NOT a new story, so if you are not interested in the new ending, no need to read it as I am not trying to scam anyone with old material.
9kirby99: http://aryion.com/g4/view/291457#item-itself
Lucky's Lovely art: http://aryion.com/g4/view/291627
Thumbnail: http://sekitaluna.deviantart.com/
(I don't use Lucky's Amazing picture, even though I'd want to, since I want to avoid confusion)
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Posted by 9kirby99 10 years ago Report
Awesome! I do love the new ending, thank you~!
Posted by Skittles209 10 years ago Report
I had to re-read the other one to see the difference. So... entrapment and continuous digestion?
Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report
Sortof. It was meant as hinting to that
she can reform those she eats, but only
if she feels like it =P If not... well.
I guess he'd be stuck or just turn shit xD
Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report
Oh yeah, and thanks for the faves =D
This version was made to correct the
story to Kirby's original idea, since
there were some missing details first.
Posted by Terrafox 10 years ago Report
So what is different with this story compared to the older one?
Posted by Komodo 10 years ago Report
Ending, mostly.