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Rogue can't help but be interested in the recent increased fertility of the X-women. But she gets a little more than she anticipated when her mother drops by for a surprise visit.
*Post reading notes*
Lalaka: "Why did you pair Emma with Rachel Summers?"
Me: "Well I wanted her to be in an actual relationship with someone and Rachel's the only other female teacher I know about"
Lalaka: "Couldn't you have paired her with one of the man teachers?"
Me: A hetrosexual relationship? In my erotic fanfiction? That's crazy talk!"
Out of all of the things I thought I would make a series of this isn't one of them.
I'm not really complaining though. Writing this third chapter has managed to get me into the "Series" mind for X-Bellies. (god dat name) and with talk of the tournament I've put on at least two more chapters to the overall story
SSSSSSSTTOOOOOOORRRRRRRYYYYYYYY!!! *collapses into chair*
Also I did my best to give what I think the sensation of being unbirthed would feel like.
Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
is arp?
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
What?
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Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
rhis sotry, is a rp¿?
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
Is this a Roll play? No
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Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
ah okthanks, eje goodsotry eje
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Posted by Naganommer 10 years ago Report
Thank you. I'm happy people actually like my work
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Posted by Redpod 10 years ago Report
your welcome:d food .d
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Posted by tylonageanie 10 years ago Report
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and I would be delighted to see you continuing it as it looks very promising, great work ;)
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Posted by Naganommer 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much for your kind words. Don't worry, there's plenty more coming.
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Posted by venomousdreams 9 years ago Report
I really WANT to enjoy this. But it fells way to forced. I can believe 1 of the xmen girls having a vore fetish, but no more than that.
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Posted by Naganommer 9 years ago Report
Oh my god YES! If there is one chapter I regret making it's this one. If I knew what I was getting myself into when I was writing this chapter I would have put far greater care into it. I remember just wanting to make a third chapter to this series and later on regretting all of the things I established here and had to keep in mind while writing later chapters. If I were to make a second draft of this series I would avoid this chapter altogether and keep the number of actual voraphiles limited to Rachel, Emma, (They hooked up because of their mutual fetish) and Laura.
Also something I didn't even notice until I started ranting but Kitty's character in this chapter contradicts her character in the next chapter. If she misses Karma so much after eating her why would she even risk doing the same to Storm.
Sorry for the ranting but I have a LOT to say about this series.
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