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Sophie was just trying to get some much deserved sleep yet her roommate Cathy had different ideas. In the wee hours she just had too drunk dial her for a pick-up from the club, wouldn’t you be mad too? But let this be a warning, never leave your friend out alone at night with vicious predators stalking the shadows.
Story told from a pretty unique perspective ^_^
Thumbnail by Mr Iddi from an old picture for me.
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Posted by eatmeplease 10 years ago Report
Oh hey I remember this!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Yep, I decided to post it, I thought people might like it.
Posted by eatmeplease 10 years ago Report
Well I did.
Posted by wiseguy288 10 years ago Report
This was one of the most creative takes on a vore story I think I've seen. I love the idea of the digestion being recorded via phone message.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much ^_^ I was very pleased with that, I hadn't seen it done before so I wanted to give it a go. I think it turned out very well. I am glad you enjoyed it
Posted by Camlio420 10 years ago Report
This story bugs me... I'm serious about that the fact that she even says she should fucking turn it in to the police before going to fucking get herself kill is unbelievable. I'm sorry I just... I can't.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Yay you came. I was looking forward to you commenting on my stories, I have seen you do it on so many others and felt left out. Also Your knowledge means that you read it so too late now ^_^
If you can't take the heat stay out of the kitchen I believe the saying goes. Oh and FYI ALL my stories are that mean to the food.
Posted by Camlio420 10 years ago Report
Yeah but, none of your other stories have the idiot ball held so tightly, which is actually the reason I have an issue with it. When someone is so damn stupid that even when they know it's going to kill them and it's sated (She knew she should go to the police with it in the story) that she doesn't takes me out of the story and even if I enjoy the vore, what happens afterwards breaks my immersion, this story actually blueballed me.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Sorry about your balls ^_^ I am glad you feel differently about my other stories though. Plus I think it was naive hope rather than stupidity, but what do I know, I just wrote it :D
Posted by Camlio420 10 years ago Report
The problem is that there's levels to how much naive hope can be used without being considered stupidity, the fact that she in fact heard everything about her friend being digested makes it stupidity that she could still believe she's alive and doesn't call the police and have them track her cellphone.
That's the issue that is implied which breaks my enjoyment of the story.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Well that assumption is on the fact that she believes something she thought impossible to be real based on messages from a drunk friend who is known for pranking people.
I don't know about you but as far as I'm aware eating someone whole is impossible, at least at the moment ^_^
Posted by Camlio420 10 years ago Report
No, it's actually been scientifically proven that there's only so much one can hear and still remain in disbelief of anything, and I'm sorry but, the fact she's heard all of that is far beyond that limit to not at least get the police involved.
Posted by Bellotor 10 years ago Report
It has? Proof please?
Posted by Camlio420 10 years ago Report
I'm trying to find it again I saw it on the internet a while back. Something about it being an instinctual response that's designed to make us not do stupid shit that'll get us killed even if we ourselves don't want to believe it.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
:)
Posted by Spector3 10 years ago Report
You made a fantastic gruesome vore story. However for future reference make sure they either pass out from lack of air or shock from the pain.P.S. how would you like to help a fellow artist out and write another? Im on dA as well but no stories up yet because the only thing that works is this shitty phone (no pun intended)
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
This pred loves to keep her meals alive by gulping down air, also lets just say she extends their suffering with magic, not easily conveyed through telephone messages. Or it could just be a world where digestion takes a while.
And help out how? ^_^
Posted by Draegonx 10 years ago Report
Very Found Footage-esque I like it alot XD
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
That's what I was going for ^_^ Glad you liked it
Posted by Draegonx 10 years ago Report
No Prob, yeah I just saw the elements and that reveal and confrontation was really awesome XP
Posted by Preacher 10 years ago Report
Wow, that was pretty good! It's certainly one of the most unique stories I've read on this site.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thanks, I thought it was different whilst I was writing it. I am glad it paid off :)
Posted by GinRyuKaza 10 years ago Report
Im not much into this type of vore but this was so well written I just could stop reading ^^
Despite what it holds it was very interesting and a joy to read to be honest ^^
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am glad that it could keep your attention ^_^ Thank you
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
Observing death over a phone conversation is quite the horror element.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Yep indeed, without visualization it was hard to write, but I think I did ok, at least I hope ^_^
Posted by IGA 10 years ago Report
Whooooaaa that was deep! Amazing writing! I love this!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it :) I thought the concept for this one was pretty good.
Posted by nauczyciel 9 years ago Report
amazing work as always. loved the pred. maybe a sequel with male prey in the far future? ^^
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Well this pred is actually my demon pred character Straxacore. So she has been featured in a few stories already... but they need updating. Plus I need to write her back story again ^_^;
Posted by nauczyciel 9 years ago Report
time for me to have a better look at your gallery then
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Well I wouldn't complain if you read more of my stories :)
Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report
Ooooohhhhh, this one! I absolutely fucking loved this one. Just so much. So cruel! :D
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Well that I'm glad about ^_^
Posted by CakeInferno 8 years ago Report
Very creative, this really felt fresh compared to how the usual vore story goes! Fully enjoyed it from start to finish! <3
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
I am sure glad you liked it ^_^
Posted by Nakeytail 4 years ago Report
Unique perspective indeed, I love it!
Posted by Straxacore 4 years ago Report
:) this story needs more love
Posted by Nakeytail 4 years ago Report
Honestly!
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Oh good, I wasn't just imagining reading this story. I've been looking for almost an hour trying to find this thing before I finally found the right tag to type in. I'd probably have found it sooner if my Bing searches didn't stop before they reached the last result...
Anyway, this is certainly an interesting story, hence me remembering it and looking for it again.
Posted by Straxacore 3 years ago Report
Wow you must really like it to go looking for it for so long :) I hope its as good as you remember
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Better really.
Posted by Straxacore 3 years ago Report
Very pleased to hear it :)
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
It helps that last time I just stumbled on it...somehow, and this time I was actively wanting to read it again. I love how twisted this is, it makes me think that if vore and predators were to exist in real life, something like this is how it would go down. Not the phone thing, just the general "being stalked and helpless, then pain and abject terror" sort of thing. It could honestly make a good horror movie...
Posted by Straxacore 3 years ago Report
"If" preds were real they could be here on the site and stalk people all the time. Even write stories about it afterwards to lure in more prey.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Hmmm-hmmm-hmmm...true.