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After taking out his aggression on not only some poor love struck kid but also his long suffering Jeremy was due a lesson in karma and isn’t that what teachers are for, at least a certain chemistry teacher thinks so.
It doesn’t take much to get a horny high schooler alone and vulnerable and Miss Winters is very adept at it.
A fatal unbirth story about why it’s not only bad but deadly to be mean to others.
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Posted by Tysia 10 years ago Report
Oooh, an unbirth story. Awesome!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Yeah it's been a very long time since I did one. I just thought I'd give it a go and it turned out well.
Posted by Tysia 10 years ago Report
It did indeed turn out well, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the great work!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you, I do my best ^_^
Posted by puck5 10 years ago Report
Good story.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it
Posted by Mad51 10 years ago Report
This begs for a sequel - honestly! Fantastic!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I wasn't aware it needed one, I thought it wrapped up nicely. What would happen in the sequel?
Posted by Mad51 10 years ago Report
The way I see it you've introduced a very dynamic and developed pred. She took care of Jeremy but whose to say she doesn't have feelings for Tim? So she might have to take someone else out of the picture lol Just spit ballin - great character - reads well.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I think she is no better developed than any of my other preds. I just sort of thought her up on the go ^_^ I am glad you like her though. I think she likes her favorite students and as they graduate the list changes so there is always a group she likes. ^_^
Posted by Chaos 10 years ago Report
Very good story, great work
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am glad you liked it, thank you :)
Posted by Xylock 10 years ago Report
Splendid stuff as per usual! :D
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like my stories
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
A very nice story.
I like this teacher, she obviously care about her students.
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
Thanks. I like to think she wants the students in her good graces to succeed ^_^ Those who aren't... well sometimes they just plum up and run away, weird ^_^;
Posted by SBisME 10 years ago Report
I loved it!! The exact kind of unbirth story I like to read! I hope to read more!
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am glad you liked it. It's only the second UB story I've written. ^_^
Posted by VoreLover9012 10 years ago Report
very nice, well written and arousing to read
Posted by Straxacore 10 years ago Report
I am glad you like it :)
Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report
Oh absolutely horrid...ly delightful, I do love a good revenge gurgling, and hell if you ain't got talent in writing it! That last bit where he couldn't really feel, see, or say anything was quite interesting, never read anything like that that didn't involve soul voting!
Posted by Straxacore 9 years ago Report
Wish I could read my own stuff as I can't remember that part ^_^; But I'm glad you liked it. My second foray into UB
Posted by Zuriel303 8 years ago Report
I'd say "Yes" to your profile picture in a heartbeat.
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Then in two heartbeats you would be a lump in my belly ^_^
Posted by Zuriel303 8 years ago Report
Woah there, that's not enough time for me to take off my clothes! lol
Posted by Straxacore 8 years ago Report
Don't worry about it. Clothes melt just as well as the person in them ^_^
Posted by DemonQueen222 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the recommendation, loved it!
Posted by Straxacore 6 years ago Report
Well that makes me very happy that you liked it :)
Posted by firefox01 4 years ago Report
this was incredible! Thank you for recommending your work!
Posted by Straxacore 4 years ago Report
Well no one else ever does but I think my stuff is goo enough to recommend :) Glad you like it