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The Legend Of General Neshik
"It has been Three Weeks since General Neshik and her army landed on the shores of their enemies. Since then, she as conquer may army bases throughout her march... without losing a single soldier."
"Now, a hooded messenger from the far lands up north, comes to seek an audience with the Tyrant, unknown if she will ever return home again."
Real Take Now: I'm so glad I finally did this ...*sigh*. Uni work was killin' me B(
Anyway, hope you like this and please leave a comment telling me what you think (and If I've done something wrong with my writing XS)
(Also I have no idea why but it came out darker for some reason and I don't know why... (-_-))
Thanks again everyone :)
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Posted by Deska 10 years ago Report
This is amazing! I do notice a few spelling errors in the word bubbles, though other then that I haven't been so hyped for a project in a long time! :D
Can't wait to see more! It is already straddling a pretty great space between risk and pleasure, so the drama already has a great many possibilities!
:D
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Thank you, and thanks for spotting the spelling mistakes (bein' autistic and dyslexic sucks sometimes -_-)
I think the next pages will just be line I think, doing it in colour takes too much time.
Again, I'm glad you liked it and be sure to see more soon ( If the Uni work doesn't kill me first)
Posted by Evilpancake 10 years ago Report
This seems really off the wall, and i have no idea where its going....... but i like it hehe
do continue
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
I will do and thank you for the comment X)
Posted by TW 10 years ago Report
Looks good to me. Although I'm more for digestion and weight gain, the belly looks great (Cause that's #1)
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
For me, the hole weight gain and digestion thing, it really doesn't work well with me on the hole appeal aspect, though I am willing to try it ones in a while.
But anyway, thanks for the comment.
Posted by TW 10 years ago Report
No worries, the nice thing is we can all have our kinks in the vore community. I still think you did a good job.
Posted by VoraciousArtistry 10 years ago Report
I completely agree with TW but I could see more in the way of proof reading perhaps, it's guards not gards.
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Thanks for knowingness the spelling mistake, I'll try to fix it when I can. As for the whole digesting weight gain thing, I'm just not really into it (though I am willing to try it ones in a while)
Posted by [Dinobonoid] 10 years ago Report
I'm happy to see more same-size f/f regurgitation!
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Nothing better XD
Posted by vasp 10 years ago Report
Love it to pieces already! Wonder if our esteemed general's visitor will be joining her pets later :P (non-fatally I hope <.< )
I have to say it's kind of hard to read unless you maximize it, but otherwise I'd say it's pretty darn solid all around.
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Yeah I realised it too posting it. As you probably already guess I'm not too good with the whole comic stile thing. Hopefully I'll get better in the long run, but until then I'm trash.
Posted by HungryScorpion 10 years ago Report
Huh, this is interesting so far.
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Thanks, I just hope it stays interesting.
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
Ooh, this starts off quite itneresting.
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Hopefully in the long run it'll be even better.
Posted by DoubleOSnake 10 years ago Report
What a way to make an intro! XD
Looks great CM, can't wait to see more! X3
Posted by CMvoreroom 10 years ago Report
Thanks, there'll definitely be more coming soon.
I still need to improve more on the hole "comic style" thing, I didn't like the way this one came out.
Anyway, thanks so much for the comment Snake, it's always good to read awesome feedback X)
Posted by Dolsilyol 9 years ago Report
Personally, the thing I like most about this is what must be running through those guards heads! As a matter of fact, I could probably right a decent sized comedy just based of it! XD
Posted by Apostolos 8 years ago Report
Hope this eventually gets finished
Posted by JohnnyF102 7 years ago Report
is there gonna be more pages
Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 5 years ago Report
is there not more ? or have you stop this comic ?
Posted by CMvoreroom 5 years ago Report
There "might' be more, but I'm thinking of redoing this who story again anyway. Plus I need the time and best idea to do so.
But I can't make any promises as of yet.
Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 5 years ago Report
oh ok but was a awsome idea
Posted by coldfire1200 4 years ago Report
;-; 5 years ?