Final Day by Spswift
(Please note, this has inspiration from other stories on the site. I you read a bit and think "Hey, that sounds similar to my story" in all honesty it probably became a part of it because of your story.)
Today was the final day of vore class. The students didn't wear clothes in class, with the exception of a platinum bracelet with their name on it. These were incase any of them got digested, to allow them to be identified afterwards. This rarely happened, of course, generally only being used as punishment in you missed class or were unruly, and always as a demonstration of a particular subject they were studying at the time. They were encouraged to masturbate during class, especially during these punishments, and to experiment with vore outside of class. Because of this, there was only fifteen of them left, but for those in the class, it was a dream come true.
Their teacher, Miss Rachel Hatherford, stepped into the room. She had long, black hair, and was tall and curvy. She was undeniably beautiful, and no one in the class would pass up on an opportunity to fuck her. She turned and locked the door behind her, before walking up to the blackboard and writing "Practical Experience" on it in big letters.
"All right class, it's been a long year. You've learned lots about vore, from swallowing to nipple vore, but while I've told you about what it's like, and you've seen me do it to naughty children from time to time, you've never experienced it yourself."
Most of the class started grinning. They all knew what this meant, that they wouldn't be leaving this room again, at least in the shape they were in now.
"As such, I want each of you to experience digestion first hand. By the end of class today, I will have 'passed' each of you, so to speak. Now then, I'd like someone to volunteer to go first, to get the ball rolling."
Jennifer put her hand up. She was the typical blonde cheerleader type, with big boobs and wide hips. She was very keen on vore, and had wanted her boyfriend, Brad, to eat her ever since she learned about it, but he wasn't a pred. Being food for Miss Hatherford was the next best thing to that.
"Jennifer. Please stand up and come to the front of the class."
Jennifer kissed Brad one last time, and then walked up to Miss Hatherford. Rachel picked her up easily, and put her feet gently into her mouth. They slid down her throat with little resistance, and before she knew it Rachel was up to Jenny's hips. She slipped her arms in on either side before continuing down her gullet. As her head disappeared, Rachel swallowed hard. Her belly bulged outwards, and Jennifer's shape could be made out on it's surface.
Rachel belched loudly. "Ahh. Delicious! Thank you, Jennifer, for volunteering. Now, let me just remind you all, this is a one way trip. Jennifer will be an example."
Rachel climbed up onto her desk as Jennifer digested. With her feet behind her head, and her hands holding her butt open for the entire class to see, Rachel started pushing out what was left of Jenny. As the last of it popped out of her, Rachel's asshole prolapsed beautifully. Not a trace of shit remained on her ass, and the only part of Jenny not on the floor was now boob and ass fat. Rachel got up and walked over to Brad, putting one leg on his desk. Sitting in his chair, he had a direct view of her moist twat.
"How'd you like to go next Brad? You must be sad about Jenny, but as a consolation, I don't think she'd be very happy if she saw you sliding into my cunt."
"I guess it doesn't matter now that she's turned to crap." He replied, leaning in.
"Well that settles it then." Spreading her pussy lips, Rachel pressed Brad's face into her gaping hole. She slid quickly over his head, then over his shoulders and down to his waist. Picking him up out of his chair, she pushed his body into her. As his feet disappeared, her pussy stared to drip. But before digesting him, she turned to his neighbour, Milly. Milly was a small, thin girl, with sandy, shoulder-length hair. She was also one of the few people in the class who didn't like the idea of being digested.
Rachel sat on Milly's desk, with her cunt facing her. She silently picked up Milly's feet, and slipped them into it. Milly was terrified, but she couldn't protest. She had never been able to say no. As her small breasts sunk into Miss Hatherford's dripping twat, a quiver broke out on her face.
"Are you scared, Milly? Do you want me to stop?" Rachel asked as her cunt engulfed Milly's shoulders. Milly shook her head. "Then goodbye, Milly. Time to become my piss!"
Rachel put her hands on Milly's head, and pushed her in. Rachel started to finger herself as Brad and Milly were turned into femcum. She spread her snatch wide as the two gushed out onto the floor.
"Oh, god, yes!" She cried, before turning to stare at the room at large. "Who wants to be next?"
Jack and Shane, the class trouble makers, soon found themselves going head first into Rachel's nipples. As their toes sunk into her, Rachel sat back. Her breasts churned the boys into milk rapidly, and she squirted them out again as soon as they were done. Before she had time to decide her next meal, Melissa stood up and asked her if she could have her girlfriend, Alice, inside her when she digests.
"Of course. How would you like to go?" Rachel responded.
"Your ass looks lovely, miss. I think I'd like to go in there." Melissa said as she walked over to Alice. Rachel stood over Melissa, her puckered asshole pressed to her face while Alice slid feet first into Melissa's butt. By the time Alice's face vanished, Melissa's hips were passing Rachel's rectum. The last of Melissa sucked into Rachel's ass with a wet pop, and she sat for a moment to enjoy it before they were dissolved and dumped onto the floor.
"More! I need more!" She gasped, before grabbing the nearest two students, Kim and Micheal, and plugging her holes with their hands. Kim could feel Rachel's cervix, tugging on her arms, while Micheal got a magnificent view of her ass.
"Enjoy the view, Micheal." Rachel exclaimed as she grabbed another boy, David "You'll be exiting through there soon enough!" As she started to swallow David's hands, Rachel began to squat downwards too, pushing Kim and Micheal into their respective holes. The feet of all three students disappeared into her in tandem, before they melted and were pushed back out her pussy and ass.
There weren't many people left now. Soon, Sammy and Tammy, twins, found themselves staring up at Miss Hatherford's face with her nipples around their necks. They had just enough time to watch their younger sister Cindy be curled up and swallowed ass first before all three of them were gurgled away and reunited with the other students on the floor.
Grabbing Caleb, the last remaining boy, Rachel's lust took control. Holding his lower half on the floor with her legs, she pushed him into her gaping twat, and thrust up and down on his body, soaking him with vaginal fluid. Just before climaxing, she let go with her legs, pulling him in and liquifying him before squirting him all over the floor.
Only Nina remained now. She was fair, with light freckles, and curly ginger hair. She had been standing as close to the action as possible, watching every second of it while fingering herself. She prodded Miss Hatherford's asscheek with a dripping hand.
"What's that? You want to go in there and be a part of my ass?" Rachel asked. Nina grinned, and started crawling into her asshole.
"Mmm, I love it when my food does the work for me." Rachel said as the young girl slowly inched inwards and was enveloped by her colon. She rubbed her belly delicately as Nina digested into fat and shit. With her asshole spread open, Rachel suatted on the floor and shat out Nina's remains.
"Thank you students!" She smiled cheerily as she stood up again "I'm so glad I got to pass all of you."
Posted by DangZerglings 10 years ago Report
Any elaboration on whether or not there's supposed to be reformation in this world? o .o
Posted by spswift 10 years ago Report
Reformation is in this world, but these guys won't be reforming this time.
Posted by nysmnyd 10 years ago Report
Soooooo they're all dead? What's the point in the class then?
Posted by spswift 10 years ago Report
No point, but they didn't know that until then.
Posted by DangZerglings 10 years ago Report
Here come the in-universe parent groups. XD
Posted by spswift 10 years ago Report
You assume they are still alive. >:)
I mean, some might be, but most of these kids will not be mourned.
Posted by nysmnyd 10 years ago Report
I get that it's all for the sexy stuff (which tbh, I didn't find all that good, it felt rushed and careless) but personally there are certain grounds to reality that need to be fulfilled to maintain immersion unless it's all out fuck you surreal.
Posted by spswift 10 years ago Report
I can understand your concerns, and I hope that, as I release more stories, the internal logic at work starts to become apparent. (Though I admit, I may eventually need to polish this story later.)
As to the pacing, it's probably my biggest weakness as a writer. It's the area I most wish to improve by writing.
Thanks for the constructive criticism, by the way. Knowing where to improve is not a bad thing.
Posted by nysmnyd 10 years ago Report
Additionally, I shall tell new writers this until the day I die, if you don't already have someone proof read your work, it really helps.
Posted by sandysoxx 9 years ago Report
I know this is a bit late to say, but I think that reality, logic, and continuity can go out the window with these stories and that's completely okay.
At the end of the day these stories are all about the sexy stuff.
Posted by Duncan-Idaho 10 years ago Report
Are you new here? The point is it is sexy in a fetishistic way. You could ask what the point of the site is while you're at it :p
Posted by nysmnyd 10 years ago Report
No I'm not new here, I'm not new to writing either, it's quite obvious that this piece is not a surrealist work and has some plausible story behind it, hell for how loosely tied in it is it's still meant to be a story driven work, so when the story breaks immersion (a key element to story telling) then it detracts from the experience and it ends up lesser because of it.
Posted by cheeseandmango 10 years ago Report
I was always a sucker for these types of stories, needless to say I really enjoyed it, I'm excited to see more :)
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
so...reincarnation rules? thats the only way i see such casual vore being allowed XDXD
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
Canonically, what she is doing is illegal, but that's not going to stop her. She's taken actions to ensure that she doesn't get caught. ;)
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
so what happens when a pred is in her class? does she go all hush hush? and how would a whole class go missing like that without any trace? XDXD or is it more of the parents annoyed their children arent preds so they want to get rid of them? also you never answered on the rules of the world? i take it them all being so callous about it means they arent dead for good.
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
She uses surveys to make sure only students who are interested in vore get into the class in the first place. I never decided whether she filtered them so only prey got into the class or whether she just ate the preds before this point, but this is fatal. They are not coming back.
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
Well still. Some sort of reincarnation system has to be there so the callous nature of these acts aren't out of place. Right?
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
You may need to explain further why that is a necessity. Rachel is fine with killing them, the kids are OK with dying, and to quote one of my later stories: "Thanks to some help from the principal, I don't need to worry about any of your parents expecting to see you again."
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
Suspension of disbelief only goes so far
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
I understand that, but without knowing which part of the explanation you have problems with, I can't elaborate. Hence my request for you to explain further. I'm not sure whether your problem is with the willing death of the students, the willing killing by the teacher, or the removal of the repercussions.
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
the willing death and the abscence of potential retaliation. an example of where fatal vore makes more sense in a callous nature would be the works of http://aryion.com/g4/gallery/blessedwasthechild she just states "some people are higher up than others and people reincarnate over and over"
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
Willing death is part of the suspension. I personally like casual fatal stuff, and that's why my stories are like that.
As for the repercussions being absent, there's not a lot I want to say right now. I can say that the principal is in on the whole thing, and that the children are never expected to go home, but even if it's clear what's up I kinda want to save that stuff for when I get to it in story.
I'm disappointed to know that you find it hard to enjoy my story, and if you want to believe reincarnation happens then you can choose to believe that (though the characters will not reappear in the stories. I suppose, considering they've passed the class, they won't need to return.)
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
i enjoy the stories a lot. i just like the idea that "hey death isnt a big deal i'll be back eventually" sort of thing. though i would personally LOVE to see the teacher at some point become bested by her prized student. then he becomes the new teacher XDXD if you ever decide to end the series that would be a great way to do so XDXD
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
I currently have an ending planned, but I do intend to write other stories outside of this series, and the "Teacher predator eaten by student" trope is one I'm keen to try writing. :)
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
awesome! now i know this is all humans. but did you ever think of doing a version with anthros and other creatures too?
Posted by spswift 9 years ago Report
I have lots of things that I'm think of experimenting with, and anthros will likely find their way in eventually (ponies too, at least once...) I think I'll take a break at end of "term 1", which ends at around my 9th story, and do some other things then, before starting "term 2".
Posted by mallowsal 9 years ago Report
sounds fun.
Posted by DrKillianNight 8 years ago Report
That was so arousing! Came quiet fast and a lot wish digestion was longer always enjoy it hen pray masterbate or finger themselves in a predictors hungry gut mmmm getting turned on just talking about it.
Posted by Anonymouslion 5 years ago Report
I Wanted milly. Because I can’t be digested and I wouldn’t digest her unless she asked. And even if she did I’d just revive her. No sense only having a good meal only once! Plus I bet she’s ticklish, and the ticklish ones always squirm the best!