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After the various qualifiers, this is the final of the eighth IVC. Cherry is back for one last attempt at the trophy!
Characters Carla, Billie-Jo, Sahiba, Oksana, Mokiya, Gabrielle, and Mona were all created by bedfordsb. Many of the elements about them in this story are derived from information in bedfordsb's stories and bios.
Warning: Contains sex, and several references to the natural outcome of digestion, including an explicit toilet scene.
Enjoy! And mentally place your bets, as to who's going to win. ;)
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Posted by kokeman 10 years ago Report
Is the first interview with Cherry somewhere? I'm curious about it now
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
It was bedfordsb's first story: http://aryion.com/g4/view/161598 .
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
Wonderful story! I am left with some unanswered questions. For example, what exacrly happened inside Gabroelle after the last scene with her prey talking to the camera?
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Thank you! As for that: It's up to the reader's imagination. What do you think happened?
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
It is dangerous to leave things to to my imagination haha.
I think that it would be an interesting problem if they pushed the camera into her intestine, then cut the cord to let it pass all the way.
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Hmm. Assuming the camera can record without being attached to the cord, those would be some interesting images!
Posted by bedfordsb 10 years ago Report
How on earth did I miss this?!
Such beautiful and versatile writing, and so much hard work, makes this stand out as one of the very best pieces of writing on eka - no, actually I think it is the best!
I'm taking it easy working my way through, because this is a joy and a delight to read. I particularly liked the ominous black ink at the Bucharest underground vore restaurant deleting the photos of people who'd already been eaten.
You captured Mona and Carla's relationship so well - it is strange and confusing, and maybe they're not being honest with each other,
but it gives me a new impetus to get on and bring that particular subplot to some sort of conclusion.
Many many thanks for a great read.
Regards
bedfordsb
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I took one or two guesses with Mona and Carla, but they were definitely interesting to write about. Carla now knows she has the potential to win one day, which would mean Mona has to make a difficult decision!
Posted by TheWiking2000 10 years ago Report
Now that's a VORE story! Well written, as always!
I do like to read about the little older cherry. It's a nice change, considering that most preds in stories are very young. I also like that you've added more women amongst the prey. I guess it's only natural that, after vore had become mainstream, that the diversity amongst the prey would increase.
I was rooting for the Gabrielle and Cherry, but of course I, like everyone else, knew that Mitsuko more or less had it in the bag :D
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Thank you! Cherry is in her early thirties, which of course is still quite young, so she could continue eating people for quite a while if she likes. But she's about a decade older than Patricia, for instance. The younger generation is taking her place.
I hope Mitsuko's victory wasn't *too* obvious from the start. ;) Mitsuko is always the strongest contender, the perennial favourite, but she only wins from time to time. (Kind of like the All Blacks at the Rugby World Cup, I suppose…) Still, she's certainly laid down the gauntlet for future contests!
Posted by Miridium 9 years ago Report
How come there haven't been any male divisions for the IVC? I'm sure there's plenty of male preds that would love to compete.
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
I'm sure there have been. This story mentions the first Vore Council-sanctioned one coming up. So they do happen - it's just that I don't write about them.
Posted by Miridium 9 years ago Report
Ah ok.
Posted by Avenger233 1 year ago Report
Do you have any pictures of Mona? She's a very attractive girl. Of course, are there any pictures of other characters, I'm curious about them.
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
Sadly not; there are no artists among IVC story readers, it seems. It's something we've all been wishing for a long time.
Posted by Avenger233 1 year ago Report
Have you ever thought about using ai technology to make the image of each character, you can use a variety of styles, such as reality or anime style, of course, there are more, this technology is now relatively mature, you only need to input the description of the character can be generated, of course, the more detailed the better. If you want to make it, you need to post it on a forum and not in a gallery.
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
It's certainly an idea; thanks! I'm not sure I would know where to start, though.