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Tags: Aarianna Alien alien pred Alien Predator alien vore Alien/Human Belly Belly bulge Bounty Hunter Coloured Sketch Commission Crying Dominating Predator Dominating Vore dominating woman Domination Endosoma F/F Female Pred Female Prey Human Prey Inside view Internal View Lesbian Living in belly Muscle Girl muscular girl new home Non-fatal Oral Vore preggo Pregnancy pregnant prey pregnant with child recursive pregnancy Safekeeping Same Size star wars Stomach Struggling Syd twi'lek Twilek Unwilling Unwilling Prey vore huntress X-ray
Written for http://aryion.com/g4/user/ILLEGAL%20ALIEN%2093
I'm not the biggest fan of non-fatal oral vore, but hey, I think this could work!
Based on this: http://aryion.com/g4/view/297382
Part 1 of 3
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Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Very nice but I noticed a few errors, overall good work though
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
Thanks! And yeah, it's not perfect. I've been distracted with finals so I did not have as much clean-up time writing this as I had hoped.
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
College or high school?
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
College. Don't worry, I'm not breaking any laws here.
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Neither am I... Just curious are they harder than high school?
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
Yes... They are... And I suffer from panic attacks... This week has not been fun.
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Well that's going to be a terror for my future... Please accept my condolences for your sanity and attitude because I believe it will rapidly get worse before it gets better (with the stress building up before the grand decision of passing or failing, one of my classmates nearly attacked someone after not getting what she wanted on her transcript ) good luck
Posted by DresdenQ 9 years ago Report
excellent, really adds to the picture, excellent prose
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
Thanks! It was the first time someone asked me to write something for them, so I was hoping it turned out all right.
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 9 years ago Report
Nice work buddy this was really good the only problem that I had with the story is that you accidently say that Syd had brown skin but that is only a minor error and also is there a chance that this series IL take a femslash turn later on ?
Posted by GrinningCheshire 9 years ago Report
Oh, I did? Sorry.
Probably will be. At the very least it will be implied.
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 9 years ago Report
Hie buddy when can you post part 2 of the story ? because I am weary exited to read it
Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 9 years ago Report
Hie buddy I have not heard from you in a while and I was wondering about how you were doing and when you cod start working on chapter 2 for this story ?
Posted by mrcool 9 years ago Report
more of this please!
Posted by BatfinK16 8 years ago Report
Will chapter 2 ever be a thing?
Posted by Karsap 5 years ago Report
So where's the rest?