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This story was meant to locate my understanding of vore: why it's a turn on, sexual symbolism, and how mouth-stomach-digestion viscera are sexualized.
To me, vore fantasy is representative of the desire to be desired so ultimately and completely that the pred would literally wish to devour you, a state which can be achieved in the stasis of being inside of and possessed by someone.
I think predators are motivated similarly, but that's clearly me projecting my turn-ons onto them.
It comes down to the question: if you were offered the single most fulfilling experience you could ever possibly have, realized through a sexual context, in an absolutely perfect scenario and with a perfect partner, would you take this satisfaction at the price of sure death? It's a question buried somewhere in this vore fetish of ours.
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Posted by BellyOfTheBitch 9 years ago Report
Really hot. Some of the writing gets abstract, but it's an interesting style
Posted by night22 9 years ago Report
I was waiting to favorite this! Grats ln the gallery!
Posted by AlekSavarov 9 years ago Report
I enjoyed this a great deal. Your descriptions are fascinating.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report
"would you take this satisfaction at the price of sure death? It's a question buried somewhere in this vore fetish of ours."
Eh, not for everyone I imagine. Those into endo and extremely unwilling scenarios I doubt. But I get the idea.
Lots of waxing detail. It's beautiful prose to be sure but feels like it gets in the way sometimes of telling the story. Perhaps it was because I hadn't fully woken up yet but the flashback was slightly confusing.
Posted by vored123 9 years ago Report
Not sure who flagged you or why; that's a constructive criticism.
You're right - the question there only really applies for my particular iteration of the fetish, which clearly involves digestion.
I get what you're saying about the language, but I figured that the plot was rightly subordinated to the style in this case - the flashback, for example, is blurry, hard to understand and abstract, because Lauren herself had no idea what was going on at the time. I also wanted to show Lauren's estrangement between that memory and her present, being that a large part of this project is to discuss the idea of death, ignorance, and the stasis of pleasure. I don't think you're wrong, though, that more clarity is possible. I'll definitely consider that.
Posted by FrozenTear89 9 years ago Report
This pharse, "he just wouldn’t realize until his hair was soaked through with her stomach acid", almost made me pass out, very hot story! Your style is absolutely amazing! Waiting for new stories!