Posted by acrylic 9 years ago Report

Cute <3

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Thank you! (:

Posted by testuser 9 years ago Report

Strange way to focus in a test but I doubt anyone will argue.

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Some people have strange habits. :3

Posted by testuser 9 years ago Report

Strange way to focus in a test but I doubt anyone will argue.

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Hehe stay curious! c: and thank you :D

Posted by calin22 9 years ago Report

This is gonna be exciting >:)

Posted by Septia 9 years ago Report

I like it and I am interested to see where this story will go~
feels a bit stale in the forth panel, but I like the style and want you to continue this~

Posted by architectap12 9 years ago Report

i love your take on this and i would love a lot more like it

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

You will! :D

Posted by architectap12 9 years ago Report

ERMEHGERD YAY!! i love this whole idea its great i cant wait to see more haha

Posted by Panther 9 years ago Report

loving how this is starting

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Thanks! xD

Posted by Diamonte 9 years ago Report

Nice, promising start. Hopefully she'll digest him? :) Please?

I like this drawing style. It would be even better with nipple protrusions and less of those pesky clothes. :P

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

We'll see. (: And thank you!

Posted by kramooo 9 years ago Report

what a good friend

Posted by Ezio45 9 years ago Report

it all going as planed. >:3

Posted by NekuTheEmo 9 years ago Report

I..this is amazing

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Ohh you are far too kind! *_* :3

Posted by NekuTheEmo 9 years ago Report

He lives my dream *3*

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

I totally know what you mean! XD

Posted by jonasgo 9 years ago Report

very nice first keep up the good work

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Thank you very much! :D

Posted by luckyB 9 years ago Report

A good start! XD

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Thanks! I hope the rest will please you as well! :3 ~

Posted by luckyB 9 years ago Report

Looking forward to see.. XD

Posted by momonari 9 years ago Report

Well, first let me say you have come a long way !!! This looks great and I can't wait to see the next page !!!

Now for the tips:

Alright; just a few observations here:

1)Shirts and boobs: In pannel 6 (last pannel)Boobs won't normally be so well defined behind a shirt; specially the lower part of the boobs will tend to become a straight line...

example 1:

http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/fairytail/images/b/bc/Lucy%27s_Celestial_Clothing_Tenrou.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20111224052247

Also clothes tend to conceal a little bit the person's silouette; so try to play with the concept of clothes a little

2)The elbows: In panels 1 and 6 the girl's elbows are too pointy try rounding them a little...

And I'll just leave these in case you wanna study more about clothing:

Pants:

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2006/how-to-draw-pants/

Tops:

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2006/how-to-draw-tops/

Skirts:

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2006/how-to-draw-skirts/

School uniforms

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2006/japanese-school-uniforms-a-girls-outfit/

Other clothes:

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2006/japanese-school-uniforms-gym-clothes/

Shoes:

http://www.mangatutorials.com/2004/how-to-draw-shoes-the-basics/

Posted by Satay 9 years ago Report

Hehe thank you again for your useful tips and I alredy tried to use them in part 2 C: and thank you for the tups there too xD

Posted by momonari 9 years ago Report

You're welcome !! I love watching you progress =)

Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report

Hahahhaha! "I meed something in my butt or I can't *Foocus*!" x3