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Part 1 of 3, this is from the eyes of the naga Ember, who gets a nice meal at school... and not much else.
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Posted by Aickavon12 9 years ago Report
it's kinda wall-o-texty...
Posted by Eric Sykes 9 years ago Report
It's because the only thing that she sees the girl as is nothing but a meal, so it's kind of emotionless due to her hunger and... obviously short.
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Hmm you named her so she is going to be in the later parts yes?
Posted by Eric Sykes 9 years ago Report
Yes she will be, the title of the file is "The trio" which means three, so three chapters, three points of veiw, one storyline, no overlap.
Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report
Fatal or non fatal?
Posted by Eric Sykes 9 years ago Report
You'll have to wait and see.
Posted by theheadsn 9 years ago Report
I liked it, cant wait for the next part
Posted by Eric Sykes 9 years ago Report
Coming next Friday... late then or early Saturday based on the time zones.
Posted by JingleJangles 9 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this and can't wait for the next two, but it hurts my eyes trying to read this 'cus the paragraphs are so compact. ;-; Nonetheless, great job!
Posted by Eric Sykes 9 years ago Report
Thanks for the tip, I'll keep that in mind before I post my future stories.