Posted by Readasaur 9 years ago Report

Oh, I love this!
You did a great job with the descriptions, and the relationship between Mac and Jimmy is fascinating.
Their friendship before this plan seemed completely platonic, but the means for smuggling Jimmy to safety established some kind of sexual tension.

Posted by zaneofbane 9 years ago Report

Thank you for you kind words.

Posted by Caustic 9 years ago Report

Love this story
I think you did a good job handeling the action in this.
It helps that Mac and Jimmy are fun likeable characters.

Posted by zaneofbane 9 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed the characters.

Posted by JMW 9 years ago Report

Wow very nice read for a first try at a furry story! Thanks for posting =^.^=

Posted by zaneofbane 9 years ago Report

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm definitely considering doing more in the future.

Posted by Theodous 8 years ago Report

Oh my goodness gracious, this was an enjoyable read. I've always loved the thought of anthro species retaining trace elements of the instincts of their feral cousins. Which would of course lead to some problems between species, much like those that Jimmy experienced while living with the family of tigers. But at the same time, it makes the bond that was forged between he and Mac so very much more meaningful.

The internal struggles of both characters as the inacted their plan is what really brought this story alive. Especially with this having been the first time that Mac had ever so much as explored anything with his rump. You could definitely get a very real feel for the turbulent storm of emotions he felt as Jimmy worked his way inside. That inner voice screaming at him that what he was doing was wrong. That he had to protect his friend. While his body was awash with the pleasure of the new sensations. And the sheer, intoxicating power of the control he held over the tiny life that was being entrusted to him. All the while Jimmy struggled with the reality of what he had commited himself to. Every breath a reminder of the natural order of things. And what his fate likely would have been, if not for the incredibly sweet tiger, who had rescued him.

I so would have loved to have seen a sequel to this story. Because I can imagine so many different things happening from this point onward. Hehe and I'll admit, there's a part of me that loves the thought of Mac becoming so entranced by the experience that he tries to talk Jimmy into doing it again, in a more intimate light. Or simply kidnapping his little mouse buddy all for himself. ^.^ Though I think the two of them genuinely care for one another enough that it would never come to that.

Thank you so very much for sharing this with us. I'll do a cut and paste of my comment on your other account. Just in case you don't check this one.

Posted by zaneofbane 8 years ago Report

Glad you enjoyed it. :D