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Turning Back The Clock By theweirdone445 -- Report

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A short, cheap fic based on this image series: http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2246598

It was so cute that I instantly thought it needed a vorish scenario around it.

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theweirdone445: I'd love constructive criticism and explicit opinions on my works. I aim to improve and your feedback is very important to me.

Of course, any words of praise are appreciated too! :)

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Halcyon

Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report

This is a really well-written story! In particular, I think that the swallowing scenes were especially hot and detailed. The moment of tension between the first prey being eaten and the second was also really exciting as well. I also especially liked the parts where the preds described their breasts getting bigger from the prey.

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