Looks really good, being really picky looks like there's some clipping issue right at the end through her teeth. Also Peach's head and boobs go through the top lip and upper teeth.
As per the other guy, the neck bulge starts too high and is pretty huge.
I Kinda liked the size of the neck bulge, though that the jaw was pulled with it did look strange. I believe it would have looked better if it was more confined to the throat.
If this is a first try though, you really got a lot of things right. Now looking for some base and finetuning and you could produce awesome animations.
Posted by Zephyre 9 years ago Report
alrighty, ill try to improve that on the next animation ill make, thanks alot :D
Posted by Shriven 9 years ago Report
Looks really good, being really picky looks like there's some clipping issue right at the end through her teeth. Also Peach's head and boobs go through the top lip and upper teeth.
As per the other guy, the neck bulge starts too high and is pretty huge.
Very good first go!
Posted by Zephyre 9 years ago Report
thanks to you too, i was a bit lazy with peach to be honest and i couldnt make her model shrink more cause sfm didnt let me :(
Posted by Septia 9 years ago Report
Could you have made Zelda's model bigger?
Posted by Zephyre 9 years ago Report
One problem would be the hair, that model dosnt use the hair itself, so i wouldve had to increase the hair size too and im to lazy to do that :D
Posted by Stunlocked 9 years ago Report
I like it
Posted by Septia 9 years ago Report
I Kinda liked the size of the neck bulge, though that the jaw was pulled with it did look strange. I believe it would have looked better if it was more confined to the throat.
If this is a first try though, you really got a lot of things right. Now looking for some base and finetuning and you could produce awesome animations.
Posted by Zephyre 9 years ago Report
Thanks for the suggestion, im really quite new to sfm, i have like 40 hours in total :)
Posted by Royal_Starlord 9 years ago Report
:U...
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