Another upload by Burner? Twice in one day? Truly this is a wondrous day... though I was kind of hoping to see where that pipeline sequence would end at something a little more. It's good nonetheless.
This first impression is pretty good with Peach looking down the small warp pipe, wondering where it may lead.
Your character designs are improving.
You draw breasts always big but not in an over-the-top but in a credible way, one that works with the rest of the design and doesn’t look ridiculous.
Peach’s wondrous expression comes across as believable too and her Clothing, arms, hands, crown, broach, earrings hair and pose also look nice.
You have still problems with noses but I also understand that noses are fiddly little things to draw on a slightly turned face.
The drawings where Peach looks smaller are cute, not supercute but balanced well so it doesn’t go into super deformed territory.
Pose and facial expression work great and the speed lines convey the jumping nicely.
The bulging in the pipe looks good, as if Peachs butt became suddenly a lot bigger. XD
I like the scene with Princess Daisy of Sarasaland, the perspective is good with Daisy standing in the background.
Her mischievous and cheeky smirk looks very nice, making it clear that she is planning something.
Her clothes and accessories look good too but I’m not sure about the pose.
I guess it is a scheming pose but it looks a little odd the way Daisy is leaning her head against her hand but it looks nice otherwise.
The backgrounds so far are minimal but sufficient.
The effect with the speed lines as Daisy jumps onto Peach looks spot on, funny and fast!
The bulging outlines look great, they look like an even bigger butt now.
The pipe sequence is delicious!
So much movement, simple outlining and bulging.
I can imagine how two beautiful princesses bulging, struggle together, outlining in the pipe and maybe cuddle a little with each other.
Even without distinct outlines of their bodies it looks beautiful and kind of sexy in a simple but very pure way.
You can draw the warp pipes very well, and especially the bulging and outlining in them.
All in all a pretty good start of this comic sequence with some minor issues.
Posted by crypto456 9 years ago Report
nice
Posted by HeroSoulSword 9 years ago Report
Very Looney Toons, but that's what makes it fun and interesting. Nice work, Burner, as always.
Posted by Suibelly 9 years ago Report
This is a pretty cute idea
Posted by NekuTheEmo 9 years ago Report
Really happy you're posting more I missed your work :3
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 9 years ago Report
Another upload by Burner? Twice in one day? Truly this is a wondrous day... though I was kind of hoping to see where that pipeline sequence would end at something a little more. It's good nonetheless.
Posted by Rendezvore 9 years ago Report
Panel 12 kind of looks like a stomach. Neat!
Posted by Oogie-Boogie 8 years ago Report
Somebody has a pipe dream…
This first impression is pretty good with Peach looking down the small warp pipe, wondering where it may lead.
Your character designs are improving.
You draw breasts always big but not in an over-the-top but in a credible way, one that works with the rest of the design and doesn’t look ridiculous.
Peach’s wondrous expression comes across as believable too and her Clothing, arms, hands, crown, broach, earrings hair and pose also look nice.
You have still problems with noses but I also understand that noses are fiddly little things to draw on a slightly turned face.
The drawings where Peach looks smaller are cute, not supercute but balanced well so it doesn’t go into super deformed territory.
Pose and facial expression work great and the speed lines convey the jumping nicely.
The bulging in the pipe looks good, as if Peachs butt became suddenly a lot bigger. XD
I like the scene with Princess Daisy of Sarasaland, the perspective is good with Daisy standing in the background.
Her mischievous and cheeky smirk looks very nice, making it clear that she is planning something.
Her clothes and accessories look good too but I’m not sure about the pose.
I guess it is a scheming pose but it looks a little odd the way Daisy is leaning her head against her hand but it looks nice otherwise.
The backgrounds so far are minimal but sufficient.
The effect with the speed lines as Daisy jumps onto Peach looks spot on, funny and fast!
The bulging outlines look great, they look like an even bigger butt now.
The pipe sequence is delicious!
So much movement, simple outlining and bulging.
I can imagine how two beautiful princesses bulging, struggle together, outlining in the pipe and maybe cuddle a little with each other.
Even without distinct outlines of their bodies it looks beautiful and kind of sexy in a simple but very pure way.
You can draw the warp pipes very well, and especially the bulging and outlining in them.
All in all a pretty good start of this comic sequence with some minor issues.
signs. Oogie-Boogie, Vore-Lover