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Tamara is the life of the party and she takes an old favorite drinking game to new levels.
(this is the first story I have ever written. I am very very new at this. I hope you all enjoy and I very much welcome any constructive criticism)
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Posted by Takaine 8 years ago Report
My apologies the formatting didn't come out as well as i hoped.
Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report
Yeah makes it a bit harder to read. I kinda just zoom in the page to make it easier. IF you can fix the format ild like to read it
Posted by Takaine 8 years ago Report
I uploaded another version that is a little better in formatting. (easier to read on the website). Normally I would scrap a debacle like this but I'm going to keep it up seeing as its mt first ever post in any manner such as this.
Posted by darc22005 8 years ago Report
Shows how you improved right
Posted by PhantomWolf 8 years ago Report
Not bad not bad you have potential Im impressed
Posted by Mastercin 8 years ago Report
A wonderful story! Separate your paragraphs more and try to make who is talking more apparent but other wise very well done! Please write more!