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She didn't notice her husband in the bowl of fruits in front of her but later a friend tells her where he was!
A little request I did. (: Another one will follow soon!
Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report
This is great, I see you're starting to understand vanishing points !! I'm very happy about that BUT your anatomy and positioning suffered a little in pannels 4 and 5: Why is it that the farthest away shoulders look bigger than the ones that are closer? why is the shoulder distance from the base of the neck longer? It makes no sense in either anatomy or space positioning, Obviously that distance between the base of the neck and farther shoulder should be less than that of the closer shoulder; specially with the thorax getting in the way between us and the shoulder, it should even be partially hidden in comparison with the close shoulder.
Aside from that, this is a great picture and I really enjoyed it !!! You're clearly getting better !! I really like the way you handled your vanishing points here ! And you're learning to make better use of your space !!
Keep it up !!! You're doing great !
Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report
O-o... Whoaly Crapsickles....
Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report
What's wrong with a little detailed analysis?
Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report
Just.. Woah... 0-0
Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report
I appreciate it, even if it's slightly overwhelming.
Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report
Hehe yeah I got a bit lazy in the end so I guess you can see that ^^" but again thanks for the critique! (:
Posted by DarkPinkie 8 years ago Report
That seems like an uneccessarly large grave for such small remains...
Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report
It probably is xD
Posted by luckyB 8 years ago Report
Hehe.. to big space for the remain. XD But GJ! XD
Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report
She wanted a normal grave for him no matter what his remains look like :b And thaanks x3
Posted by vyvince1997 6 years ago Report
At least she has the decency to give him a proper burial
Posted by Satay 6 years ago Report
He was her husband at least so it is appropriate, don't you think? ;)
Posted by NyaatoShiroi 4 years ago Report
I am glad to see my niche~ Pooping in grave~