Archive > Satay > Vore > A Special Fruit
Click here to see the original full-sized image.
Item
Add to favorites | Full Size | Download
< < Previous   Next > >
A Special Fruit By Satay -- Report

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Views: 12,643

File size: 1.43 MiB

MIME Type: image/jpeg

Resolution: 2894x4093

Comments: 14

Favorites: 82

She didn't notice her husband in the bowl of fruits in front of her but later a friend tells her where he was!

A little request I did. (: Another one will follow soon!

Comment on A Special Fruit

Please login to post a comment.

Comments
momonari

Posted by momonari 8 years ago Report

This is great, I see you're starting to understand vanishing points !! I'm very happy about that BUT your anatomy and positioning suffered a little in pannels 4 and 5: Why is it that the farthest away shoulders look bigger than the ones that are closer? why is the shoulder distance from the base of the neck longer? It makes no sense in either anatomy or space positioning, Obviously that distance between the base of the neck and farther shoulder should be less than that of the closer shoulder; specially with the thorax getting in the way between us and the shoulder, it should even be partially hidden in comparison with the close shoulder.

Aside from that, this is a great picture and I really enjoyed it !!! You're clearly getting better !! I really like the way you handled your vanishing points here ! And you're learning to make better use of your space !!

Keep it up !!! You're doing great !

RossTheEmeraldFox

Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report

O-o... Whoaly Crapsickles....

iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report

What's wrong with a little detailed analysis?

RossTheEmeraldFox

Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report

Just.. Woah... 0-0

iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 8 years ago Report

I appreciate it, even if it's slightly overwhelming.

Satay

Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report

Hehe yeah I got a bit lazy in the end so I guess you can see that ^^" but again thanks for the critique! (:

DarkPinkie

Posted by DarkPinkie 8 years ago Report

That seems like an uneccessarly large grave for such small remains...

Satay

Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report

It probably is xD

luckyB

Posted by luckyB 8 years ago Report

Hehe.. to big space for the remain. XD But GJ! XD

Satay

Posted by Satay 8 years ago Report

She wanted a normal grave for him no matter what his remains look like :b And thaanks x3

vyvince1997

Posted by vyvince1997 6 years ago Report

At least she has the decency to give him a proper burial

Satay

Posted by Satay 6 years ago Report

He was her husband at least so it is appropriate, don't you think? ;)

NyaatoShiroi

Posted by NyaatoShiroi 4 years ago Report

I am glad to see my niche~ Pooping in grave~