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At first this was supposed to be "This is my rock now" and after about half of it a sand tiger shark would pop up and swallow the eel head first. But after one page I sort of grew attatched to the snake like fish and decided to let it live and make it the star of the story, featuring how it managed to survive and eat its way to adulthood.
Similar in length as the last one, some parts of it inspired by this video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YqwD7D50YIM
I also did not ask anyone to proof read this time and instead relied on MS Word to point out my mistakes.
Should you find utterly disfigured grammar in it: I'm not the one to blame.
Thumbnail pic courtesy of TyphaKoromo from FA
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Posted by Fallenfox 8 years ago Report
Thanks for the video link! The moray in that video ALMOST had that shark... SO close! Here's another video you might enjoy: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YvH9oVcULRc
Posted by Fischie 8 years ago Report
Thank you for the link too. The guy filming was making all sorts of mistakes but the last bit of the video was really good.