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A start of a vore series. While I will still try hard to come up with good plot points, this will be stronger on vore side of things.
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Posted by AustinWolfclaw 8 years ago Report
Just read the four chapters published, and looking forward to more.
Posted by kamperkonkel 8 years ago Report
Coming right up!
Posted by Fischie 8 years ago Report
Nice first chapter. I do not mind the way the story quickly gets to the vore part.
Even though there are quite a few typos in there, it was a joy to read and your description of the protagonist spending time in various stomachs is really good and seem to have interesting effects on him and his predators.
Posted by Nomad3628 2 months ago Report
Awesome start. Hardcore internal scenes. But I have a question. What kind of tunnel they drove through? Like a normal looking one what made them dimensonal jump on the other end end just gone after the bus got out?