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Stacy is a high class girl. Smart, beautiful, talented. It's always been hard for her to find a guy who can compete with her, but, at last, she's found him: Alan. Brilliant, handsome, and skilled. Stacy knows he's just the guy for her.
All she needs is the approval of her best friend: Corri. Corri's huge. Corri's rude. Corri's gross. But, of course, Corri has Stacy's best interests at heart. After all, she's always been the one who made sure that Stacy doesn't get stuck with a bad boyfriend. If Alan doesn't meet Corri's standards well... she has ways of making sure he doesn't bother Stacy ever again.
Madsci comes up with some great, gross preds. Corri was a joy to write out. Such a good... friend. ^^
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Posted by deletn92b69g26 8 years ago Report
Yeah, friend is the wrong word for sure to describe Corri....still, pretty good story!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Oh, but she's just very... enthusiastic about watching out for Stacy!
Posted by deletn92b69g26 8 years ago Report
Sure. :P
Honestly, you think Stacy will stop getting guys eaten, and just accept she's Corri's bitch.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
One can always hope. XD
Posted by Mad51 8 years ago Report
Loved how this turned out. Worth every penny.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thank you so much!
Posted by lyingunderfire 8 years ago Report
Damn! I love a good dark story!
Question all you want. You will get no answers!
*Quiet chuckling*
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Hey, there's nothing dark about a good, uh, buddy looking out for her friend. Nothing!
Posted by lyingunderfire 8 years ago Report
Nothing at all.
Nothing at all.
Nothing at all.
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Woah. What the fuck did I just read? Poor man. Jeez hell. So not fair. But gah, in so many ways so sexy, but gross at the same time. Like a literal mind fuck. Nice job!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by JuneMooshiji 8 years ago Report
Stacy should be abused next. God that would be so hot. Maybe she gets eaten when Corri deems a boyfriend passable?
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
Hey, who can say? Corri's a big girl with a big appetite. XD
Posted by TheLoneTemplar 7 years ago Report
I'd have to agree she's abusive as hell and not in the kinky good way either, that's a bit far for me but; personal opinions aside ; the story was well written and flowed well, although I'd suggest trying out a couple of other styles, both of writing and predators as well
Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report
Thanks a lot for both the compliments and the feedback. :)
Posted by Bellyful 7 years ago Report
I loved this one. Hope it has a sequel!!
Posted by Belloc 7 years ago Report
Thanks!