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First CV attempt.
If you must throw rocks at me, please don't hit my face. I need at least one thing my chungus ass can be proud of.
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Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report
An actually good story. You should be more confident in your writing abilities.
Posted by Shammerham 8 years ago Report
I am confidant in my lore writing abilities. I can construct some in depth stuff. Problem is when I'm writing a narrative. I constantly doubt my choices. ESPECIALLY when it comes to writing porn.
Posted by diverco 8 years ago Report
Very hot story, do you ever do post vore? Like spraying their cummy remains out on the barn floor?
Posted by Shammerham 8 years ago Report
I'm always open to it. I kinda did already, I mean Bets and Mel were basically getting their bellies filled with Fran and her moms. So yeah! I'm definately willing to try that someday. Maybe with the new beastie in the profiles section.
Posted by umbramagna 8 years ago Report
Damn, I loved it!
Posted by Shammerham 8 years ago Report
'Preciate it, dude! Can always use positivity.
Posted by PhantomWolf 8 years ago Report
Original, well written, creative not bad I liked it. Only had an issue with describing the woman Mel as a "photo negative" took me a second to figure out what you were talking about before I realized you were trying to make it clear she was Black woman. But thats minor overall great story! And don't worry I have no stones to throw! Lbs
Posted by Shammerham 8 years ago Report
Thanks, bruh! The photo negative line was my attempt at fancy wordplay. So... yeah.
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
I was very impressed to see a story that featured a feral predator, and cock vore. I'd love to see similar concepts. The science fiction aspect is something I could have done without though.
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
I've wanted to see something with a feral pred and cock vore for a long time now xD
Posted by EldritchWriter 8 years ago Report
Hilariously written. Well done. I don't really care for CV, but this one has piqued my interest.
Posted by Shammerham 8 years ago Report
'Preciate it man!
Posted by Nobodie 7 years ago Report
Any chance at a prequel with the lesbian moms and daughter getting lured in. could even have it where the moms are in one sac while the daughter is in the other, moms are 69 it up for the 2 days.
Posted by Nobodie 7 years ago Report
crap no edit. Have it in the head that the one mom goes to feed it, doesn't come back for a couple minutes, other mom checks just in time to see the first in the process of sliding in.
Posted by Shammerham 7 years ago Report
Not a bad idea, truth be told. I'll give it some thought. I was actually considering doing a sequel at the aformentioned beach involving more snakes or maybe a big frog.