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A while back Larkspurdiblock on Deviantart made an updated version of my Grimm Park map. In return I made them this story.
Once again I made a story way longer than I had intended. I guess that's a good thing? In this one Yang learns to not mess with weird artifacts or....does she learn to do so more often? You guys be the judge.
I'm sorry for all the unavoidable snake puns.
Hope You All Enjoy! And as always, comments and criticisms are welcome.
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Posted by Flame14 8 years ago Report
As I basicly said on you DA version, loving the story and how you went about using Yangs change to create some vore.
Quick question: Are all her friends in their school uniforms or casual clothes when eaten? I'm sort of leaning towards casual because I don't think Velvet would bend over like that with a short skirt on, unless she was trying to get Yangs attention. Hmm...
Posted by Davyjones 8 years ago Report
The others were likely all in their uniforms since they just came from class. Sam goes with Velvet. Who knows maybe she was hoping Yang and she would get even closer.
Posted by Flame14 8 years ago Report
Closer, huh. Don't think she can get much 'closer' then she now is with Yang. Still I'd love to see a story like that. Yang honestly seems the type who could find anyone, gender or race, attractive. Maybe Yang should jokingly suggest a threesome between herself, Blake and Velvet just to see how they react!
Also, Velvet, in a skirt, bending down like that... Bunny girl pantie shot implied. Now I'm going to have that image of my RWBY-verse waifu bending over in a short skirt. Way to go brain.
Looking forward to more RWBY vore antics.
Posted by Davyjones 8 years ago Report
Well aloof forward to them.
And darn it now that image/scene is in my head as well.
Posted by tankbuster626 8 years ago Report
This story both enlightens me, and angers me, as im reminded that i lost about half my progress on my latest story draft -_-
Posted by nnn4463 8 years ago Report
Oh no, losing work is always the worst ='(
Posted by tankbuster626 8 years ago Report
Agreed, hopefully Google Docs is smart enough to fix its dumbass mistake.
Posted by Davyjones 8 years ago Report
Ouch my sympathies. I actually went to repost a story here and couldn't find it on my comp. Thank goodness it was up on DA. Losing my stories or having them deleted is one of my big fears. Especially since RWBY art is often a target for reports.
Posted by tankbuster626 8 years ago Report
Seeing as how this was on google docs, i have a 50/50 chance of it coming back, so, thumbs crossed.
Also, love the JNPR vore scene, made me giggle :)
Posted by Davyjones 8 years ago Report
Thanks I was writing their part out and I thought of that scene from volume 1 and low and behold they run right into her mouth.