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(Originally finished Vore Day, August 8, 2016 / Edited and Re-Uploaded July 2020)
WARNING: This item has explicit disposal at the very beginning and the very end. "+ + + + +" denotes the beginning of a scat section, and "~ ~ ~ ~ ~" denotes the beginning of a section without scat.
Plot: After somehow ending up in a jar in the clutches of some hungry harpies, two dozen micro mermaids are carelessly dropped into the open sea. Read as they struggle and ultimately fall prey to a harsh ecosystem entirely unlike their own as they re-learn what it's like to be at the bottom of the food chain.
This was originally a series of vignettes I started writing in my free time, which I compiled and edited for vore day. Altogether, they make for a pretty good story.
Enjoy! Let me hear your comments and thoughts!
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Posted by Fischie 8 years ago Report
A really nice story with lots of well written vore in it. I enjoyed the well described stomach scenes in particular.
Posted by Halcyon 8 years ago Report
Sorry for the late reply, but thank you for your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Posted by Cobbly 7 years ago Report
I'd love to hear more about these mermaids. And their world. Are the human sized mermaids also treated like fish? Or more like dolphins?
Posted by Cobbly 7 years ago Report
I'd love to hear more about these mermaids. And their world. Are the human sized mermaids also treated like fish? Or more like dolphins?
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
That's a good question! I think "dolphins" is a good way to put it. I don't think the girls were fishing for mermaids - rather, they were probably trying to use the little ones to lure in big (regular) fish.
Posted by Cobbly 7 years ago Report
Fascinating. I know asking for a part 2 is probably a stretch, but if you're ever in need of an idea...
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Well, I don't know if there will be a part 2, but I'd love to hear your ideas anyway! ^^
Posted by Cobbly 7 years ago Report
A big load of minnows sent to a sushi restaurant. They can do nothing but watch as they are sliced into sashimi, deep fried into tempura, made into soup, or rolled into... rolls.
Posted by Halcyon 7 years ago Report
Ahhh that IS an amazing idea! Sentient the whole way, right? Wow, I'll certainly keep this in mind.
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
So... this is part of the Demi U universe right?
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
The demi Universe
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Not really. If anything, this is in the same universe as my story "Seafood," but this was before Demi U.
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Didn't minnow mermaids appear in the vore restaurant? Which is in Demi U? Are they a different species?
I pefer the idea of the Demi Universe, so I'm just gonna pretend.
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Also, the names Maya and Riko sound vaugley familiar. They're not from nyan adventures are they?
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Not that I can remember! :p but they are in another story of mine~
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Which story?
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
"Seafood" ^^
Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report
Oh yeah
Posted by amerdism 6 years ago Report
Love this story, Katie and Alisha are my favourite parts. Will you ever write a continuation.
Posted by Halcyon 6 years ago Report
Thanks so much~! There's a possibility of a sequel ^^
Posted by amerdism 6 years ago Report
Then here’s hoping, it’d be kinda interesting to see if some people realise the sentience of the minnows and try to help or something.
Posted by JustaNumber 5 years ago Report
Marvelous, again