Hey CC good to see you again. Not to mention Evelyn too given what I am going to review about. It's been a while since seeing you but I'm happy to see that you're not entirely out on the art business yet. I hoped to see you more often. Also on with the review.
Seriously man, it's good way to get Eve back into the game with Vore Day. Mostly with the title for it's very fitting. Ate eight...that's a good one there. But seriously your use of progression for a comic is good man. Mostly with how Eve would contemplate what she's doing with eating so much until she decides to just eat the sign itself as it slides down her throat and enters her giant belly. Poor Eve, never seems to catch a break all the time.
Now to the design of the comic itself I could see that you're really improving on your drawing style man. To start with the comic progression style it's been done really well as it shows the process of Eve and what she thought about. Then we go to the character design itself for she looks good. I'm not just talking about the color but the texture and shading as well. I mean it showed just how real Eve could be given what I'm seeing. Her hair really looks like a dark shade of brown from what I'm looking as well as the design. She's so looking good on it. And her dress shows just how limited it can be holding all that food within her. The Belly itself looks rather real and large with who she ate for this day given the distortions and bumps as well as imprints all around it. Her expressions really say a lot for Eve's character and helps to show her emotions in every panel.
All in all you did good here man and seriously you're improving on this one. I hoped to see you do more of Eve and other works in the future. Oh and don't worry for later I'll be reviewing one of your other pics for the female character of Sun and Moon. So watch out for that one later. Though would like to see a meeting between your Eve and Pokemon XY's Evelyn, CC Man. But don't feel pressured to doing it. Do it at your own pace.
She needs to enjoy it more and once she has finished digesting them rub her nice flat tummy and think about how 8/8 people have vanished into her forever!
There is Ramadan, it's a month of fasting during daylight hours. Of course during the evening... *horror movie sequence, strobe light effect of Eve looking ravenous, charging the camera. Cut to black. Large belch then pitiful complaining.*
Wow! the look on her face as the 8/8 sign went inside as well. Hmm Eve can get greedy at times :) You have a formidable insight into human emotions and i dont know... good! good! *pats you on the shoulder*
Posted by lordamaterasu03 8 years ago Report
always have to have that one day you dread but it's not because it's bad for you. XD
Posted by smiley 8 years ago Report
Would Ate again?
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
8/8 it's gr8
Posted by smiley 8 years ago Report
gr8 belly
gr8 taste
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
thx m8
Posted by Way2Weird4Some 8 years ago Report
For more puns, you'll just have to w8.
Commented this totally incidentally on Feb 8th.
Posted by HangryWriter25 8 years ago Report
Hehe, poor Eve's life is hell.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
indeed
Posted by NeoXtreme 8 years ago Report
Poor Eve, we still love her.
Posted by Hazeyoyo123 8 years ago Report
That looks like a tasty.. sign?
Posted by SweetAndFrosted 8 years ago Report
What is the date of vore day? I thought it was last week
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Today, AKA 8/8, AKA Ate-Ate
Posted by SweetAndFrosted 8 years ago Report
Oh, thanks
Posted by neko1992 8 years ago Report
Wow thats a lot. One question will they be let out or dissappear
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
It is indeed a mystery
Posted by DanzoLegend 8 years ago Report
Aww she should be happy to have a valid excuse to eat people today xp
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
but she doesn't like being a pred!
Posted by DanzoLegend 8 years ago Report
oh i know. this is the final step to danganrompa style despair x3
Posted by DontShowMeOnGoogle55555 8 years ago Report
Why is she a pred then?
Is she self aware of her art existence?
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
She's an unwilling pred, dominated by an urge of hunger that will haunt her until she eats something.
Posted by testuser 8 years ago Report
Nyuknyuk
Posted by BlueMarvel611 8 years ago Report
Hey CC good to see you again. Not to mention Evelyn too given what I am going to review about. It's been a while since seeing you but I'm happy to see that you're not entirely out on the art business yet. I hoped to see you more often. Also on with the review.
Seriously man, it's good way to get Eve back into the game with Vore Day. Mostly with the title for it's very fitting. Ate eight...that's a good one there. But seriously your use of progression for a comic is good man. Mostly with how Eve would contemplate what she's doing with eating so much until she decides to just eat the sign itself as it slides down her throat and enters her giant belly. Poor Eve, never seems to catch a break all the time.
Now to the design of the comic itself I could see that you're really improving on your drawing style man. To start with the comic progression style it's been done really well as it shows the process of Eve and what she thought about. Then we go to the character design itself for she looks good. I'm not just talking about the color but the texture and shading as well. I mean it showed just how real Eve could be given what I'm seeing. Her hair really looks like a dark shade of brown from what I'm looking as well as the design. She's so looking good on it. And her dress shows just how limited it can be holding all that food within her. The Belly itself looks rather real and large with who she ate for this day given the distortions and bumps as well as imprints all around it. Her expressions really say a lot for Eve's character and helps to show her emotions in every panel.
All in all you did good here man and seriously you're improving on this one. I hoped to see you do more of Eve and other works in the future. Oh and don't worry for later I'll be reviewing one of your other pics for the female character of Sun and Moon. So watch out for that one later. Though would like to see a meeting between your Eve and Pokemon XY's Evelyn, CC Man. But don't feel pressured to doing it. Do it at your own pace.
Keep up the good work in any event man. Laters!
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by Pixel 8 years ago Report
There's only one sure way to never stray from the light. EAT THE LIGHT!!!
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
at this rate she may as well!
Posted by Pixel 8 years ago Report
And imagine how cool it would be have a glowing belly? She'll be the envy of her friends, even if she can never tell them how it happened.
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
yaaay corruption~
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
poor thing!
Posted by RavenXeo 8 years ago Report
I wanna cuddle her! ....from behind and nowhere else<3
Posted by Orchestration 8 years ago Report
She needs to enjoy it more and once she has finished digesting them rub her nice flat tummy and think about how 8/8 people have vanished into her forever!
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
You aren't getting further from the light. Your stomach is just blocking more of it.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
well played~
Posted by JessicaRae 8 years ago Report
Hmm...is there a holiday anyway where you're not supposed to eat anything? :V Any holiday is harsh for the poor dear. >.<
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Probably but seems like not!
Especially a holiday where eating stuff is encouraged!
Posted by Pixel 8 years ago Report
There is Ramadan, it's a month of fasting during daylight hours. Of course during the evening... *horror movie sequence, strobe light effect of Eve looking ravenous, charging the camera. Cut to black. Large belch then pitiful complaining.*
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
she'd never last even the day periods!
Posted by JessicaRae 8 years ago Report
lol Poor Eve. XD
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
she just can't win!
Posted by CGR-7 8 years ago Report
Afraid you can't eat your problems away that easily like you did that sign, Eve. XD
Happy (belated) Vore Day, C.C.. =)
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
sadly sometimes she wish she can!
To you as well~
Posted by jaykayeight 8 years ago Report
Wow! the look on her face as the 8/8 sign went inside as well. Hmm Eve can get greedy at times :) You have a formidable insight into human emotions and i dont know... good! good! *pats you on the shoulder*