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Osh is having a great first date, but then Chiyuko has a surprising request.
So, a few months back, I saw an interview with Japanese porn stars Anri Okita and Hitomi Tanaka. They were releasing a video they had made together in which they intentionally threw off a bunch of normal Japanese porn conventions -- they looked at the camera, they smiled, they acted like they enjoyed sex. Input this into my brain and I decided to do something similar with a different type of Japanese porn staple -- the rapey tentacle monster.
The first draft in my brain involved the woman coming home from a long day at work just wanting a good tentacle raping from her tentacle monster husband. Somehow it became this instead.
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Posted by satanhymn666 8 years ago Report
I read the story this morning. Sorry I haven't commented in a while, but either way, it's good to have you back with us. :)
It's a really great story... and it's really heartwarming too, considering trying times like these in the US these days. Good work man, keep it up. :)
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks. There's definitely some social commentary hidden somewhere in there. Whoever added the "space racism" tag, that's brilliant.
Posted by satanhymn666 8 years ago Report
xD As for me... I'm a little more blatant about it...
*cough* Refugee Crisis Averted *cough*
And I thought you put in the tag as a joke! lol Either way, nice work :)
Posted by blackrain 8 years ago Report
I have to say I liked this story a lot too. I love romantic vore stories. I hope you write more like this or continue with this story.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 6 years ago Report
Wow! sorry it took me so long to find and read this one, its really awesome. Generally I like to read good vore and imagine im being slowly and sensually devoured by a non sentient creature of some sort but this was amazing. I liked that she was treated with respect and her pleasure was important and not just a consequence of being swallowed. It hit all the right buttons, I'd love to read more stories like this, thanks for all you do!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 6 years ago Report
Glad you like it! It was a lot of fun to write, and one that I'm proud of.
Posted by thisgirlroolzz 4 years ago Report
Hi, I just re-read this again just now, a year later. It was great the second time too, unless I missed it any chance you could write a second date for the couple? It sounds like they are really going to have an amazing relationship!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
Hadn't had anything planned, but people expressing interest always helps give me inspiration. We'll see...
One problem is, four years later, trying to remember how I pictured Osh, since I took pains to not fully describe him. Ha.