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Have you ever thought about what it must be like to live with a vore? There'd probably be some annoying adjustments. Ella finds out firsthand.
Really silly little collection of ideas more than anything. All vore is off-screen. I'm sorry for the last part. It's meant to be a slice of vore's real life complications with a humorous twist, but will probably be as close as I ever get to water sports.
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Posted by Ridwanwolf 8 years ago Report
I really liked the milk bit.
I wish I had a room mate like that. XP
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Well, there's some good stuff -- the milk and the loot -- but there's some downsides, too, and that's even with a vore who very consciously will not eat you. Not everyone's so conscientious.
Posted by Whereaminow27 8 years ago Report
I almost thought she was going to get it in the end ^
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
I briefly considered it, but that would have been too predictable. Vores aren't always the most scrupulous, but Grace is. That's why she made sure to tell Ella to stop saying things were getting eaten might have been the proper response.
Posted by TheBlueOne 8 years ago Report
Really enjoyed this story. Would love to read about Grace some more :D
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Hadn't thought about bringing Grace back. That being said, the intestinal distress part was derived from an idea I had a few years ago to have vores get together for drinks and complain about their worst experiences. Maybe I'll still do that, and Grace will be one of those vores. Hmmm. And Ella could still narrate as a third wheel...
Dammit, adding that back to the horse-choking list of stories to write.
Posted by minasan 8 years ago Report
This was actually really great. I hadn't really thought of this idea until I read the description, but it's really awesome.
I especially love the breast milk bit.
I definitely wouldn't mind seeing more of this.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks! At this point, as I mentioned in another comment, I'm actually a bit bored with writing the swallowing part of vore. It's the scenario, now, especially the weird little stuff that might happen in real life, that is really interesting at this point.
Incidentally, the breast milk bit was inspired by a coworker, who recently had a baby and a few weeks later found her brother unwittingly eating a bowl of cereals and her breast milk. Unlike Grace, she couldn't bring herself to tell him. My brain immediately put that in a vore context, so here we are.
Posted by DRayElliott 8 years ago Report
Oh man, that's hilarious, about the brother eating the tit milk cereal.
Posted by mallowsal 8 years ago Report
was kinda hoping she became a vore too XDXD
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
This was great actually. I've gotta emulate this sometime.
Posted by awakener 7 years ago Report
I thought this was really enjoyable and I probably would act the same way if I were in Ella's place. I think it would definitely be interesting. Can't believe hair dye would mess with a Vore so bad but hey, what can you do?
Posted by TwrchTwryth 7 years ago Report
Every now and then I stop to think about just how bad our personal hygiene products would mess up a predator, since it's not safe for consumption. Then you have jewelry to worry about too...
Posted by Throku 7 years ago Report
Well depends on if you're nickel allergic or not, most jewelry is made of inert metals, so they'd likely come out looking like they did going in, perhaps with a patina. (You know how silver gets black and you need to polish it.)
I'm sort of curious now how much crap stays in the hair after dyeing. I mean the classic bleach blonde has the chemicals in the bleaching process, the peroxide is nasty shit, but you wash it all out, so it shouldn't make much difference unless they've done a poor job of it with their do it yourself at home kit (A friend of my sister damaged my favourite recliner that way, bleaching the leather on it at a party, I guess she'd done her hair just before the party.) But dyeing is different, then tehre's clearly dye left behind and since hair is already dead material...who knows what crap you're allowed to put in it?
Posted by Squall 7 years ago Report
It'd be kinda cool if Ella were to get into a threeway with her and another girl just to watch Grace vore. Or even a fourway, with both girls going into her tits so that Ella can sample from the tap, as it were. Good Story.
Posted by Restrogenic 6 years ago Report
I kinda want them to get together