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Nida is tired of waiting for her sister to eat her and goes for it. Older sister Qazla has some surprises for her...
Started with the first line, rest flowed from it, sort of like a (hopefully better) "Why Won't You Eat Me?" I continue to skirt the issue of sister-on-sister incest, which I admit to finding appealing, but I do not have the guts to actually cross that line.
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Posted by Firefly212056 8 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this. I can say without a doubt that I loved reading the dialogue as much as the unbirthing scene. Also, the incest was excellent.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
At this point, I've written enough swallowings and unbirthings that it's actually the most tedious part of doing a story. Dialogue is where it is at, and usually one or two lines is where I start.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
I've gotten to this point too. I find it so strange though. The interaction between characters has become my favorite part to write as well.
Posted by DangZerglings 8 years ago Report
Sister/sister incest can be fun, but for some of us, it's more of a mood thing. Among other factors. But, I can totally get why you'd skirt it.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Definitely should be the right mood. That's important in any fetish writing. Maybe someday I'll get the courage.
Posted by Whereaminow27 8 years ago Report
I liked this a lot. Hopefully she will learn how to do Oral and other types also :)
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I don't think oral vore is in Qazla's future, unfortunately. Maybe Nida has a talent, though...she's just beginning to realize her sexuality...
Posted by Nightcrawler99 8 years ago Report
"Few misprints" "Good grammar" "GREAT STORY!"
If a sequel to this is ever done, I hope it features Nida going back into her sister. Only when its time for her to come out and Qazla tries to evict her, Nida prevents her birth because she doesn't want out yet. Then later when she finally does want out, Qazla won't allow her to because she's out in public, someplace holly or perhaps with new friends she doesn't want knowing about her ability to UB.
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Sorry, sis, but you're not coming out. You should've listened to me earlier as now people think I'm pregers and I can't afford to give birth to you or they'll think something's up. Hope you like pretending to be my surrogate baby for the next month cause that's what I had to tell people who asked about my belly.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Interesting idea for a sequel, really emphasises the trust you have to put in someone if you're going to go into their body.
Posted by Nightcrawler99 8 years ago Report
REALLY Glad you like my idea!^^
Hope to see you put it to good use in a sequel to this sometime soon as I'd just love to read it!
I do have one request though, and that's that you don't put any cummification, regression, or absorption stuff into the sequel if you really decide to make one.
I say this cause that sort of stuff is on the rise right now and I find that sort of thing a major turn off as death is depressing. However I'm perfectly fine with a characters digestion and death it they are REALLY deserving of it.^^
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Finally got around to reading this. Wow! Just wow!