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Casey's big plans for Mary are dashed because the early bird gets the worm, and she isn't early enough. Still, she tries to find a way to salvage the night.
Had this idea while out hiking today, then since I had a long drive home I experimented with dictating on my phone. It actually worked okay, except I had to put in a lot longer than I expected cleaning it up. Probably because I was watching Fury Road at the same time. This is another one where the vore is almost secondary to the dialogue.
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Posted by SpotLight 8 years ago Report
not bad, but there were some grammar problems
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Eh, not surprised. That's going to be the problem if I keep up with the dictation model, as it requires more thorough copy-editing than I'm usually willing/able to conduct.
Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report
Quite enjoyed it. :D Wouldn't mind seeing more of this character.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Thanks. No plans to bring them back right now, but you never know.
Posted by Jack 8 years ago Report
I enjoyed that one a fair bit.
Thanks for the upload!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Cheers!
Posted by mallowsal 8 years ago Report
i think it would be hilarious to have a sequel where the father is actually a massive predator. just ashamed that he does it in an unusual way XD
Posted by dragon32078 8 years ago Report
I would love to see a prequel of this story. In that story, we would find out about Mary being eaten by her mom.
In regards to the dialogue, I did find it rather funny. As always, I love your work, which I read almost as much for the humor as for the vore.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Hmm, hadn't thought about doing a prequel...may have to look into that. Otherwise, thanks for the feedback. I (usually) try for something humorous or just a little different, so I'm glad you approve.
Posted by dragon32078 8 years ago Report
In regards to the prequel I have done a little bit of thinking. On the one hand the oral vore has no sexual component for the mom. She does not view her daughter sexually, but I do wonder if she would still sexually pleasure her daughter. This may be the only sexual encounter the daughter ever has in her life. If this is the case, then it is very possible for her mom to pay special attention to her breasts and even clitoris. Just a thought.
Posted by averyhillpeak 4 years ago Report
I don't know what it is about this one but I just keep coming back to this one. The tone of how casual they are is just great.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I love to hear that these silly ideas I have can catch people's interests or reverberate with them.