He took a step back, contentedly beholding his work. She looked beautiful. From her shoulders down to her ankles wrapped in seaweed, her hands slightly raised above her head, tied to a hook in the ceiling. In her mouth glistened a red apple.
She had invited him over to her apartment this afternoon; some small talk, probably watching TV or a DVD. And traditional food from her home country should be served: Sushi. What a luck he had remembered to bring along enough rice. After chatting for a w
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So. Almost right after my last blog, here is another one.
This time, because I have a question.
I am currently writing on some sort of a story and I am rather stuck somewhere in the middle, because I am confronted with a problem I cannot seem to solve.
It is about a friendly guy, of the type which gives cookies to kids, helps grandmas across the street and is generally polite, kind and helpful. But in a likeable way.
But now, where I have (hopefully) built up the readers sympathies after half of the story, I want to corrupt him. Because there would otherwise no way that he would ever start devouring people and kill them by digestion.
The question is, how do I do that without turning the readers against him? Of course I could go with "It's...
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Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Thanks a bunch! These archives are the results of many years of gradually, obsessively writing naughty stories, so I'm glad you've enjoyed what you've seen so far.
And yeah, real life has been cutting into my writing time, but I'm not retiring anytime soon either, so you can expect that sooner or later inspiration will hit me again, and there'll be some more vorish goodness for me to upload.
Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 13 years ago Report
Thanks, of course, for the watch! It's an honor, and most appreciated!
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