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A young lad discovers that predators aren't limited to sexual ones.
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Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
Cheers!
Posted by noego 8 years ago Report
Hope the ride was fun!
Posted by joeburp22181 8 years ago Report
In one side and out the bum!
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
Right from the first paragraph, I love the way you describe Deborah. You have these wonderful efficient descriptions which suggest everything with grace and efficiency.
I also note at how your interests are gettign enjoyably stranger, as have mine :) Always fun to see people write stories of strange and unusual stuff !
Posted by noego 8 years ago Report
Thank you! IDK how I wrote this one. 100% flow of conscience thing. I tried writing after this, but it's as if the writing spirit wore off right after. Hopefully it'll return one day, we'll see!
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
The best stuff imo is flow of conscience, especially erotic stuff. The only way to do it is to let it flow and not care one whit what others think of it.
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
I want to add: The reason why I think that flow of consiciousness is best is because, think about it: At its base, what is an erotic dream? It is a situation in which two objects bonk into each other or one object goes into/out of another object. Boring, right? But it's the passion and the emotion that makes it come alive in such colorful ways. And that is when our unconscious mind is streaming freely.
Posted by noego 8 years ago Report
Could not agree more. Its too bad I can't seem to reach my passion more consistently. To be fair, in this case, this was based (partially of course) on a certain experience of mine that was good for this scenario, so there is a more emotional basis than on other stuff I've tried.
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
I don't think it's too bad in that sense.
Basing it on experience is ABSOLUTELY the right way to do it.
These things have to come as they are inspired, and as the writer is emotionally inspired based on real life stuff, and only when it feels right. "frequency of output/production" really is not a relevant thing to think about in this community in mmy view.
Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
If you'll still haz comments, this was a very nice read
Posted by noego 4 years ago Report
I'll haz all the comments, all the time. Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment!