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Sore Loser By JohnMorningwood -- Report

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Quick, unedited 1000 word thing, where Clair eats someone because she's amazing.

If you don't like Clair and this brings up bad memories from your childhood, I'm glad :)

Rosa story is next I promise

Have an awesome night :D

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ThunderKing

Posted by ThunderKing 5 years ago Report

0/10 worst girl stop making me nut to her already dammit

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Go the fuck to sleep

massvore

Posted by massvore 5 years ago Report

dammit Clair, you sore loser, you were already hot in my childhood now I cant focus on the battle now -_- (by the way nice story)

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Haha, thank you very much :)

Glad to know that child you had good taste, unlike most people :p

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 5 years ago Report

Awesome :D Nice so see such a cool story again :3

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Thanks :)

I'm glad you liked it!

Halcyon

Posted by Halcyon 5 years ago Report

Nice job! It's not easy to fit such a complete vore scene into just 1,000 words, but you did it quite successfully. Clair doesn't give much of an explanation for eating Lyra, but... who needs one? The description of her assets expanding at the end was a nice touch as well.

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Exactly! You never need a reason to eat someone!

Neraciro

Posted by Neraciro 5 years ago Report

I imagine the whole Dragon Fang/test (depending on whether it's Gold/Silver or Crystal) is just an excuse to eat her prey away from prying eyes. It lets her turn up and coming trainers into down and going ones...

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Couldn't have put it better myself! After all, there's gotta be a reason Lance has stayed as the champion for so long

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 5 years ago Report

Fucken cruel as hell but hot!

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Fuckin hell yeah! Eating for the sake of eating (and crushing dreams)!

Cryos

Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report

Great little short story you got here, friendo. Theres no way i could write as good a story as this in 1000 words, so nice work!

JohnMorningwood

Posted by JohnMorningwood 5 years ago Report

Aww, thanks a ton man! And don't sell yourself short, either. You're a great writer!

Cryos

Posted by Cryos 5 years ago Report

But im actually good at selling myself short, whereas Ive never been great at putting so much detail into things like you and a bunch of others on the site. So until that time comes, ima go ahead and say your work is better than mine, good sir.

HungryScorpion

Posted by HungryScorpion 4 years ago Report

Y'know Clair, you and Whitney could really take lessons from Jasmine on how to be gracious losers.