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After being consumed a second time in her life, Android 18 is struggling to deal with the thoughts that keep popping up in her mind about being eaten. After a talk with Master Roshi, he gives here an idea that might help her deal with that feeling she's craving.
Any errors in DBZ canon are entirely my errors.
Posted by slickwick45 8 years ago Report
This was a great story using Majin Buu like that. I also love anything that has to do with the love between 18 and Krillin. Very well written!
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Posted by the_Wolf 8 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliment, glad you enjoyed it. Most of the credit for the idea goes to the commissioner, though I'm happy with how it turned out. Must admit, I'd never been a DBZ fan myself, but I found the ideas behind the 18/Krillin love story is pretty awesome. Happy that fans approve. :)
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Posted by boomerangfish 8 years ago Report
That was great, and dare I say, really cute? It was nice to see Roshi acting as advice for the Z Fighters and it was nice for a story about acceptance. Gosh. I just love how friendly everything was, and 18 didn't die or anything! That was great!!
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Posted by the_Wolf 8 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliments! Admittedly a lot of credit for those concepts goes to the commissioner, but I'm happy that it had the right feel to it for those ideas. :)
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